for Ferris Wheel9/27/2012 c1 ichigoxryou2
I love the way you portray White! Or Hilda depending on what name you're using. She's such a character! I love when she invades N's space. :D
I love the way you portray White! Or Hilda depending on what name you're using. She's such a character! I love when she invades N's space. :D
7/22/2012 c1 lea
i love her violent tendencies throughout the story because somepeople would mention it in the begining but never add it into the story again. the main charater is refreshing with her views violent tendencies and she actually cares about personal space when in most other stories he or she is a goody-goody that's touchy-feely. i love the story and how she didn't allow N to up stage her and how she interrupted his "show of superiority". please continue writing it was very enjoyable.
i love her violent tendencies throughout the story because somepeople would mention it in the begining but never add it into the story again. the main charater is refreshing with her views violent tendencies and she actually cares about personal space when in most other stories he or she is a goody-goody that's touchy-feely. i love the story and how she didn't allow N to up stage her and how she interrupted his "show of superiority". please continue writing it was very enjoyable.
7/2/2011 c1 Lyla
this is amazing! I love this :) please do more NxWhite ^^!
this is amazing! I love this :) please do more NxWhite ^^!
3/24/2011 c1 
2Shadow Dice
Dude... awesome! That's the one word I could think of for this one-shot! I loved the ending, made me giggle xD Seriously though, the main character never gets to make the dramatic exit... the bad guys always get the cool exits ;0;
Will there be a sequel to this or is it a one time thing? I loved to see more one-shots like this one :)
Shadow
2Shadow DiceDude... awesome! That's the one word I could think of for this one-shot! I loved the ending, made me giggle xD Seriously though, the main character never gets to make the dramatic exit... the bad guys always get the cool exits ;0;
Will there be a sequel to this or is it a one time thing? I loved to see more one-shots like this one :)
Shadow
3/24/2011 c1 3CoffeeIncluded
*Snerk* Not how it's happening in my story, but pretty funny regardless.
3CoffeeIncluded*Snerk* Not how it's happening in my story, but pretty funny regardless.
3/24/2011 c1 26AngelZ Of DarKness
This gave me a laugh, Go white for showing N whose boss! Great chapter/Story thing!
26AngelZ Of DarKnessThis gave me a laugh, Go white for showing N whose boss! Great chapter/Story thing!
3/24/2011 c1 7Meta-Akira
Love this story. It made me chuckle, especially with White's tendency to hit things that freak her out. XD
And N was adorable!
7Meta-AkiraLove this story. It made me chuckle, especially with White's tendency to hit things that freak her out. XD
And N was adorable!
3/23/2011 c1 30Chi Yagami
wow I almost skipped this because it's not in the Pokemon category ^^;; I totally would have thought N a creeper too! and then punched him XD
30Chi Yagamiwow I almost skipped this because it's not in the Pokemon category ^^;; I totally would have thought N a creeper too! and then punched him XD