for To Save A Friend11/10/2012 c1 
4Fullmetal-Soul
That…was…DISTURBING.
Oh, it was good. Truley and honestly, I thought it was amazing. But I was making this face the whole freaking time. My mom asked me if I was about to cry and my sis proclaimed I was reafing rape online. My mom told my sister to hush and tell the truth XD
You should put more description in a rape scene- i.e. thoghts and/or emotions.
Also, please continue this awesome yet chilling fic! It would make this sick twisted fangirl very happy! _
4Fullmetal-SoulThat…was…DISTURBING.
Oh, it was good. Truley and honestly, I thought it was amazing. But I was making this face the whole freaking time. My mom asked me if I was about to cry and my sis proclaimed I was reafing rape online. My mom told my sister to hush and tell the truth XD
You should put more description in a rape scene- i.e. thoghts and/or emotions.
Also, please continue this awesome yet chilling fic! It would make this sick twisted fangirl very happy! _
9/23/2012 c1 loveless fangirl
can you right a 'recovery' sequel where Darren's all fragile and frightened?
can you right a 'recovery' sequel where Darren's all fragile and frightened?
3/18/2012 c1 47Kitskune Miyake
Gotta say, I loved it! Not the whole rape thing, but the concept of "too good a friend." Awwww poor Evra. Darren's really that good a friend.
47Kitskune MiyakeGotta say, I loved it! Not the whole rape thing, but the concept of "too good a friend." Awwww poor Evra. Darren's really that good a friend.
9/4/2011 c1 9Vanchanaut7
Two words. Ama-Zing. I love the last line especially. This totally seems like something Murlough would do!
9Vanchanaut7Two words. Ama-Zing. I love the last line especially. This totally seems like something Murlough would do!
4/25/2011 c1 Rapelover
I have read some of your stories and I have a suggestion. If your making a rape story you sould at least have some ** and not only bangging. Also you sould put more detail on the raped scenes. You should also tell what the characters feel physically and emotionally. And by the way I'm excited to read your story prison sex.
I have read some of your stories and I have a suggestion. If your making a rape story you sould at least have some ** and not only bangging. Also you sould put more detail on the raped scenes. You should also tell what the characters feel physically and emotionally. And by the way I'm excited to read your story prison sex.