for Neon Genesis Disgaea: Hell on Earth7/4/2011 c4 Chargone
this fic is confusing.
mostly due to a complete lack of detail about what's going on in most scenes. this may be deliberate and stylistic (i think that's the word i'm after) but currently it just leaves the reader with no idea what the hell's going on. it'd probably work if it weren't, you know, the majority of all four chapters present so far...
ehh, i dunno. it's got potentual, i want to see where it's going... but...
blah. maybe it'll improve.
this fic is confusing.
mostly due to a complete lack of detail about what's going on in most scenes. this may be deliberate and stylistic (i think that's the word i'm after) but currently it just leaves the reader with no idea what the hell's going on. it'd probably work if it weren't, you know, the majority of all four chapters present so far...
ehh, i dunno. it's got potentual, i want to see where it's going... but...
blah. maybe it'll improve.
6/1/2011 c4 
28Gundam Kaiser
This story is, to be blunt... EXCELLENT!
It has a perfect blend of Disgaea's humor and Evangelion's mind-screw, although if Kurtis could curb-stomp Shamshel, I think Laharl would be able to take down Ramiel, but oh well. I eagerly await the next chapters, when you get to them.
28Gundam KaiserThis story is, to be blunt... EXCELLENT!
It has a perfect blend of Disgaea's humor and Evangelion's mind-screw, although if Kurtis could curb-stomp Shamshel, I think Laharl would be able to take down Ramiel, but oh well. I eagerly await the next chapters, when you get to them.
3/27/2011 c1 7Kamen Rider Wizard
Oh my god you have made my day with this story you need to continue and the omake MAO YES I could SOOO see him doing that
7Kamen Rider WizardOh my god you have made my day with this story you need to continue and the omake MAO YES I could SOOO see him doing that