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3/11 c1 22BlueAndLily4Ever
wow!
2/2 c1 kidvskat fan
i hope you are making a story called coop go see fiona
5/30/2012 c1 42iheartphinabella05
Lol I loved the PnF reference at the end. Please continue this and check out my upcoming kid vs kat story
8/31/2011 c1 joey
Love it please continute it.
7/20/2011 c1 16thundra501
I LOVE IT please continue
6/30/2011 c1 Guest
And another part will aver?
5/3/2011 c1 132Crazy-Pairing-Girl
OMG! WHO GASPED? WAS IT KAT? DOES KAT LUV COOP? UPDATE! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! I WILL KILL YOU IN YOUR SLEEP IF YOU DONT UPDATE WITHIN 2 WEEKS!
4/13/2011 c1 31Animegx43
Ya gonna add a second chapter soon?
4/4/2011 c1 P and F forever kvk too
Wow awesome. update! *send to publisher*... xD
3/30/2011 c1 20MissyMeghan3
XD nice, i like it!can't wait for the rest!
3/29/2011 c1 Protecor Of Men Roy
Wise People Say The Course Of True Love Never Did Run Smoothley.
3/28/2011 c1 21Volcanic Lily
Haha, I did like the Phineas and Ferb reference. It made me smile. :)

On the plus side: originality; I think this is the first Kid vs. Kat fanfic about this pairing. I don't like cliche things, but this isn't cliche, so... good?

Now, the bad side: I noticed a ton of misspellings (examples: sereously instead of seriously, Febe instead of Phoebe, gousts instead of ghosts, etc.). Maybe spellcheck could help. :)

It is surprising that Fiona could write such a good song, but then again, the show hasn't given her any character flaws and has made her good at everything, so I guess that's perfectly in character. (Personally, I think Fiona is a bit of a Mary Sue, but that's just my opinion.)

Anyway, good job on being original and for actually putting some story in with the song, since for most fanfic writers, a songfic equals a song and maybe two or three sentences of actual "story." So good job on that, and have a nice day.

...Hey, where's Perry? XD

~Lily

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