for Fallen Superstar8/26/2012 c25 
2LegsxRko
GREAT JOB DAKOTA! I LOVE THIS FANTASTIC STORY! IT ENDED PERFECTLY!I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!(sorry for the caps lol)
2LegsxRkoGREAT JOB DAKOTA! I LOVE THIS FANTASTIC STORY! IT ENDED PERFECTLY!I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!(sorry for the caps lol)
8/26/2012 c25 34XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx
...I honestly don't know what to say, I'm like almost crying here! I can't believe its all over! but it was such a wonderful story and I was honored to help out once in a while.
John did return to where he belongs! I'm so happy! I bet he has Torrie, Kenzi in the audience or watching at home. :) his lovable perfect family.
I loved how you said he had fallen, but would never fall again that just defines John Cena. Many times, that guy has stumbled and got back up. Hell he has scars and everything, I just love him so much! :D
Absolutely loved this story! maybe we can get a sequel one day! I can see John having two girls. Kenzi as a big sister.
Great Work sweetie, You're a wonderful friend too. Thanks for the lovely little message.
Well this story is over, but I hope more is to come!
Love KellyMarie.
xoxoxox
34XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx...I honestly don't know what to say, I'm like almost crying here! I can't believe its all over! but it was such a wonderful story and I was honored to help out once in a while.
John did return to where he belongs! I'm so happy! I bet he has Torrie, Kenzi in the audience or watching at home. :) his lovable perfect family.
I loved how you said he had fallen, but would never fall again that just defines John Cena. Many times, that guy has stumbled and got back up. Hell he has scars and everything, I just love him so much! :D
Absolutely loved this story! maybe we can get a sequel one day! I can see John having two girls. Kenzi as a big sister.
Great Work sweetie, You're a wonderful friend too. Thanks for the lovely little message.
Well this story is over, but I hope more is to come!
Love KellyMarie.
xoxoxox
8/26/2012 c24 XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx
Oh my gosh, so much tears shred in that final chapter. Well I'm definitely going to follow with the rest of them, I have tears in my eyes! it was so beautiful! to think how far this story has become.
So many different emotions in this story, and the way that day went just had happy endings written all over it!
Alana is healthy, beat Cancer thank the lord! nothing is more horrific than a child losing their short little life from a horrible disease so I'm very happy about that. :)
As I think back to this story, I think how far John has come after having his life turned upside down. Having his daughter just dropped off he had to keep it all together, sure there was def times that he stumbled and fell down but in the end he had become a great father!
I believe if it ever happens for John in reality, he would be a amazing dad such a lovable kind heart!
I have to put this...TORRIE'S PREGNANT! :D that's amazing news! John can experience the whole parenthood even before lol, with hormones, sickness and everything. I definitely think he can handle it. I'm so happy that Kenzi called Torrie mommy! shown their little family!
Shawn, Jeff had me giggling all through out this story especially when they were playing with dinosaurs, they really didn't grow up. I can see Shawn playing with his kids, hogging a toy hehe.
I'm off to read epilogue, cant believe its over! :( wonderful work sweetie! xxx such a fantastic story! full of a roller coaster of emotions. I'm so proud of you, happy you finished the story!
Oh my gosh, so much tears shred in that final chapter. Well I'm definitely going to follow with the rest of them, I have tears in my eyes! it was so beautiful! to think how far this story has become.
So many different emotions in this story, and the way that day went just had happy endings written all over it!
Alana is healthy, beat Cancer thank the lord! nothing is more horrific than a child losing their short little life from a horrible disease so I'm very happy about that. :)
As I think back to this story, I think how far John has come after having his life turned upside down. Having his daughter just dropped off he had to keep it all together, sure there was def times that he stumbled and fell down but in the end he had become a great father!
I believe if it ever happens for John in reality, he would be a amazing dad such a lovable kind heart!
I have to put this...TORRIE'S PREGNANT! :D that's amazing news! John can experience the whole parenthood even before lol, with hormones, sickness and everything. I definitely think he can handle it. I'm so happy that Kenzi called Torrie mommy! shown their little family!
Shawn, Jeff had me giggling all through out this story especially when they were playing with dinosaurs, they really didn't grow up. I can see Shawn playing with his kids, hogging a toy hehe.
I'm off to read epilogue, cant believe its over! :( wonderful work sweetie! xxx such a fantastic story! full of a roller coaster of emotions. I'm so proud of you, happy you finished the story!
8/18/2012 c25 16RandyOrtonxWifexx
He gave mack up :/ ! It's was ok I liked it but I wished he would if kept her and everything worked out with him and torrie
16RandyOrtonxWifexxHe gave mack up :/ ! It's was ok I liked it but I wished he would if kept her and everything worked out with him and torrie
8/18/2012 c25 1therealchamps
Very great story. Probably got to put the "c" at the top so everybody will know its finished.
1therealchampsVery great story. Probably got to put the "c" at the top so everybody will know its finished.
8/18/2012 c25 1caz21
Love it you should continue this story as a sequeal. Well done with the whole story.
1caz21Love it you should continue this story as a sequeal. Well done with the whole story.
8/17/2012 c24 12JorriexLover
Well...you deserve WAY more than one review. But as I am very scrapped for time, I'll just do the one.
Mackenzi Anne is so sweet! And she's JUST like her father. It was crazy how much alike they were.
And John...oh lordy, was he amazing as always! I loved how you made the WWE Family so close and they were ALL Mackenzi's aunts and uncles. It's easy to fall in love with John Cena, and even easier to fall in love with his daughter.
As you know, I love, love, love Jorrie. so, of course, I had to contain myself from squealing at the adorable Jorrie parts. *Clears throat...the hospital AND the karaoke.
Shawny lost Mackenzi! I was so upset about that, but then Adam found her. Yay for Edge! I boohooed like a freakin' baby when John got hit by the huge truck. NO ONE KILLS JOHN CENA AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!
But luckily, he didn't die. If he had of...
I digress.
The ending was great. Mackenzi called Torrie mommy! Yay, yay, yay! And now they're having a baby. Triple yay, yay, yay! I cannot WAIT to read the epilogue. You must post it soon.
Oh, and by the way, I can't wait to read your next story, either.
-Your friend, Kalina. :)
12JorriexLoverWell...you deserve WAY more than one review. But as I am very scrapped for time, I'll just do the one.
Mackenzi Anne is so sweet! And she's JUST like her father. It was crazy how much alike they were.
And John...oh lordy, was he amazing as always! I loved how you made the WWE Family so close and they were ALL Mackenzi's aunts and uncles. It's easy to fall in love with John Cena, and even easier to fall in love with his daughter.
As you know, I love, love, love Jorrie. so, of course, I had to contain myself from squealing at the adorable Jorrie parts. *Clears throat...the hospital AND the karaoke.
Shawny lost Mackenzi! I was so upset about that, but then Adam found her. Yay for Edge! I boohooed like a freakin' baby when John got hit by the huge truck. NO ONE KILLS JOHN CENA AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!
But luckily, he didn't die. If he had of...
I digress.
The ending was great. Mackenzi called Torrie mommy! Yay, yay, yay! And now they're having a baby. Triple yay, yay, yay! I cannot WAIT to read the epilogue. You must post it soon.
Oh, and by the way, I can't wait to read your next story, either.
-Your friend, Kalina. :)
8/14/2012 c24 2LegsxRko
I just read the whole story between yesterday evening I loved it. I laughed and nearly cried (I never cry but just almost) :) It was amazing can't wait to read more. :)
2LegsxRkoI just read the whole story between yesterday evening I loved it. I laughed and nearly cried (I never cry but just almost) :) It was amazing can't wait to read more. :)
8/14/2012 c24 Cena's baby doll
OmW u back! Yay an awesome super update!
I was think of this fic, was going to pop u an email, wondering y there was no updates!
Awww totally cute chap! Loved it!
OmW u back! Yay an awesome super update!
I was think of this fic, was going to pop u an email, wondering y there was no updates!
Awww totally cute chap! Loved it!
8/13/2012 c1 12JorriexLover
Well, I apologize that it's taken me so long to find this. But here I am so, I'm gonna read it all tonight and give you one very, very long review tomorrow morning! :)
12JorriexLoverWell, I apologize that it's taken me so long to find this. But here I am so, I'm gonna read it all tonight and give you one very, very long review tomorrow morning! :)