for No Air10/23/2012 c15 
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Seriously, the girl has a death wish to leave Peter and scamper off alone!
4noukinav018Seriously, the girl has a death wish to leave Peter and scamper off alone!
10/23/2012 c13 noukinav018
This is getting so dark and troubling. Hope dying wasn't expected. I can't believe she's gone. If she returned it was to warn them that much that they beat her to it.
This is getting so dark and troubling. Hope dying wasn't expected. I can't believe she's gone. If she returned it was to warn them that much that they beat her to it.
10/23/2012 c10 noukinav018
You were right about the darkness that goes around this plot. How convenient XD Ed's out of the spotlight to let Peter shine.
Yah, that and Cair Paravel can't be without at least a leader strong enough to defend them in any emergency.
You were right about the darkness that goes around this plot. How convenient XD Ed's out of the spotlight to let Peter shine.
Yah, that and Cair Paravel can't be without at least a leader strong enough to defend them in any emergency.
10/23/2012 c9 noukinav018
Finally everything begins to make sense.
Dear me,another brawling. I'm missing the girls and Falcon a lot...and Milla :(
Good grief. Aerilyn's last statement could deflate any man. Omg Pete can't even kiss her without her having the dark memories back.
Finally everything begins to make sense.
Dear me,another brawling. I'm missing the girls and Falcon a lot...and Milla :(
Good grief. Aerilyn's last statement could deflate any man. Omg Pete can't even kiss her without her having the dark memories back.
10/23/2012 c8 noukinav018
It seemed likely to be her...the reason is beyond my comprehension.
Oh man. What a problem, Peter is gonna be somber from now... :(
It seemed likely to be her...the reason is beyond my comprehension.
Oh man. What a problem, Peter is gonna be somber from now... :(
10/23/2012 c7 noukinav018
No kidding. As for whom should be paired with whom...I'm for Peter and Aerilyn. She's broken, he's tired of fooling around. He's the person that can make her believe that men aren't like the one who nearly destroyed her.
Oh and don't forget the dreams.
Good! Next chapter the killer's out! That's gonna be a shock. What of Su? She sort of vanished? That happened to at some point with Lu in the last story I believe...
Mike needs a mouth filter. You can't talk to a pregnant woman like that. She's all emotional as it is...and not confident on herself to top it all. I wish Aerilyn let Peter talk about his dream instead of running away. She might know of his incorregible reputation and think the worst of him,but knowing that the high king likes to fight for things to go through,he'll make it work somehow.
No kidding. As for whom should be paired with whom...I'm for Peter and Aerilyn. She's broken, he's tired of fooling around. He's the person that can make her believe that men aren't like the one who nearly destroyed her.
Oh and don't forget the dreams.
Good! Next chapter the killer's out! That's gonna be a shock. What of Su? She sort of vanished? That happened to at some point with Lu in the last story I believe...
Mike needs a mouth filter. You can't talk to a pregnant woman like that. She's all emotional as it is...and not confident on herself to top it all. I wish Aerilyn let Peter talk about his dream instead of running away. She might know of his incorregible reputation and think the worst of him,but knowing that the high king likes to fight for things to go through,he'll make it work somehow.
10/23/2012 c6 noukinav018
Oh? And who heard said conversation?
LOL. Yah, Lucy is so candid and conservative compared to others.
Uhm...what of Violet? What exactly was that supposed to mean?
Oh? And who heard said conversation?
LOL. Yah, Lucy is so candid and conservative compared to others.
Uhm...what of Violet? What exactly was that supposed to mean?
10/23/2012 c5 noukinav018
You know, when I began reading the part leading to Safara's interview the moment she mentioned that it was something private to Peter...That's when the pregnant suspicion was a possibility to me XD
Oh,so she's out of the I remember her drinking water instead of wine with Aerilyn. That really rang some bells XD LOL
You know, when I began reading the part leading to Safara's interview the moment she mentioned that it was something private to Peter...That's when the pregnant suspicion was a possibility to me XD
Oh,so she's out of the I remember her drinking water instead of wine with Aerilyn. That really rang some bells XD LOL
10/23/2012 c4 noukinav018
I believe everyone has their point,but they're not going anywhere if they avoid each other.
Questioning every soul in Cair Paravel would have been a better choice to not have hostile people towards Peter,but those interviews would have been eternal.
Yah, I think Aslan should show up XD and when is Peter letting her know about his dream?
I believe everyone has their point,but they're not going anywhere if they avoid each other.
Questioning every soul in Cair Paravel would have been a better choice to not have hostile people towards Peter,but those interviews would have been eternal.
Yah, I think Aslan should show up XD and when is Peter letting her know about his dream?
10/23/2012 c3 noukinav018
Huh? I for once think he's kind of doing this for show. As much as they want to strangle him for his decision, they really should put in his place to even imagine the pressure on his shoulders.
He doesn't get abreak, does he?
Hmm somehow this seems so odd. Aerylin appears and the lord gets killed...if it wasn't her, perhaps the girl knows who murdered the man.
The truth is unclear to me. There could be tons of possibilities.
Huh? I for once think he's kind of doing this for show. As much as they want to strangle him for his decision, they really should put in his place to even imagine the pressure on his shoulders.
He doesn't get abreak, does he?
Hmm somehow this seems so odd. Aerylin appears and the lord gets killed...if it wasn't her, perhaps the girl knows who murdered the man.
The truth is unclear to me. There could be tons of possibilities.
10/23/2012 c2 noukinav018
Well as this is focused on Peter I guess we'll get to see what troubles him greatly in his position of high king,perhaps his siblings don't even know half of what goes trough his head. :)
Seriously? Aerilyn seems like someone to put the womanizer king to the test :D
Oh man, Ed and Falcon will have a field day with him in the future.
Well as this is focused on Peter I guess we'll get to see what troubles him greatly in his position of high king,perhaps his siblings don't even know half of what goes trough his head. :)
Seriously? Aerilyn seems like someone to put the womanizer king to the test :D
Oh man, Ed and Falcon will have a field day with him in the future.
10/23/2012 c1 noukinav018
Omg as soon I found out you wrote the sequel I began reading. Good grief you had me on stitches. Falcon is incorregible XD
And Peter makes me laugh too much for his thoughts on Lucy specially.
Ed and Safara are the death of me I think. People in Cair Paravel are in for lots of excitement from the fiery couple LOL
Aaw poor Falcon. Hope he meets Milla soon again as a sar and I'm curious of the one who was watching him on the beach. Was it her or was that your new OC?
Omg as soon I found out you wrote the sequel I began reading. Good grief you had me on stitches. Falcon is incorregible XD
And Peter makes me laugh too much for his thoughts on Lucy specially.
Ed and Safara are the death of me I think. People in Cair Paravel are in for lots of excitement from the fiery couple LOL
Aaw poor Falcon. Hope he meets Milla soon again as a sar and I'm curious of the one who was watching him on the beach. Was it her or was that your new OC?