for Forgotten Mists3/5 c3
3ChordOverstreetFan
Much better than the original. It would be a waste if it were not continued.
3ChordOverstreetFanMuch better than the original. It would be a waste if it were not continued.
11/2/2012 c3 FranscoiseLaraLapis
Hello? I just read this story. I can say that the plot is very good. Along with the characterization of the characters. Please continue the story. It would be such a waste, if not. Thank you.
P.S. If you are continuing the story, I am very much excited for the next part of the story.
Hello? I just read this story. I can say that the plot is very good. Along with the characterization of the characters. Please continue the story. It would be such a waste, if not. Thank you.
P.S. If you are continuing the story, I am very much excited for the next part of the story.
11/12/2011 c2 The Monochrome Illusion
If I could go in that story, I would **ing torture that sick bastard who dares think he is superior and riiyu friend should die. I hope to every god I can think of that he is not given a quick threat, let riiyu , Fuji, and seichii deal with him. torture him until he begs and pleads t be sent to hell but even that wont be enough. I know it's fiction but there are actual people like him and it makes me sick and disgusted. Pardon my language but I think that thing who is called Superior doesn't deserve to be called human. He deserves every ingle curse word . But I do love your stories all your pot stories are my fav, especially ice princess.
If I could go in that story, I would **ing torture that sick bastard who dares think he is superior and riiyu friend should die. I hope to every god I can think of that he is not given a quick threat, let riiyu , Fuji, and seichii deal with him. torture him until he begs and pleads t be sent to hell but even that wont be enough. I know it's fiction but there are actual people like him and it makes me sick and disgusted. Pardon my language but I think that thing who is called Superior doesn't deserve to be called human. He deserves every ingle curse word . But I do love your stories all your pot stories are my fav, especially ice princess.
7/11/2011 c3 Hikari kitsune1102
Love it! Who are u gonna pair riiyu up with. Ps I love shiraishi
Love it! Who are u gonna pair riiyu up with. Ps I love shiraishi
7/11/2011 c3
5DaPurpleDino
OMG OMG OMG OMG. AMAZING CHAPTER! Things are finally happening! xD
Poor Senri though ... TT.TT
5DaPurpleDinoOMG OMG OMG OMG. AMAZING CHAPTER! Things are finally happening! xD
Poor Senri though ... TT.TT
6/19/2011 c2 Evci
Nice to have you back ! Hope you update soon, enjoyed the chapter, can“t wait for more !
Nice to have you back ! Hope you update soon, enjoyed the chapter, can“t wait for more !
5/27/2011 c2
1MoonPalace
Yay, awesome chapter, as usual :) I WANT TO KILL THAT STUPID, JERKY, IDIOT, SELFISH, COWARD, BITCHY, WORSE THAN ** SUPERIOR! D: Ahem excuse me, I rarely cuss, if any at all. He just got to the top of my nerves. Anways, it was a great chapter :)
1MoonPalaceYay, awesome chapter, as usual :) I WANT TO KILL THAT STUPID, JERKY, IDIOT, SELFISH, COWARD, BITCHY, WORSE THAN ** SUPERIOR! D: Ahem excuse me, I rarely cuss, if any at all. He just got to the top of my nerves. Anways, it was a great chapter :)
5/27/2011 c2
1demoncat13
wow the Superior is an IDIOT! come to think of it I'm suprised that Fuji hasn't killed him yet...why is that? ...is Chitose gonna die or will he kill the person(s) sent to kill him?
1demoncat13wow the Superior is an IDIOT! come to think of it I'm suprised that Fuji hasn't killed him yet...why is that? ...is Chitose gonna die or will he kill the person(s) sent to kill him?
4/23/2011 c1
5DaPurpleDino
Love it.
It seems more fitting than it was with the last one.
Can't wait to see how this plays out ^^
- DPD
5DaPurpleDinoLove it.
It seems more fitting than it was with the last one.
Can't wait to see how this plays out ^^
- DPD
