for A Living Ghost1/12/2012 c80 
1MariaAleja
I absolutely love this story. I just wanted to tell how how beautifully you've written Fee'a love for Pip. I really hope very ring is going a better for you and hope you cn get to finish this lovely piece. Good luck.
-Aleja.
1MariaAlejaI absolutely love this story. I just wanted to tell how how beautifully you've written Fee'a love for Pip. I really hope very ring is going a better for you and hope you cn get to finish this lovely piece. Good luck.
-Aleja.
11/3/2011 c80 QueenCobraWing
I hope your personal struggles turn out well, and that normalcy returns to your life.
I know that it is not your intention, but I just want to tell you to not stop writing. You are very talented and creative.
I eagerly await more of your writing. Until then, good luck :)
I hope your personal struggles turn out well, and that normalcy returns to your life.
I know that it is not your intention, but I just want to tell you to not stop writing. You are very talented and creative.
I eagerly await more of your writing. Until then, good luck :)
8/26/2011 c79 5Sheila Chiaroscura
Nice! I'm looking forward to her next meeting with Pippa, and to their visit of the art gallery, I love the scenes with Miss Moore being all mysterious. Well done!
5Sheila ChiaroscuraNice! I'm looking forward to her next meeting with Pippa, and to their visit of the art gallery, I love the scenes with Miss Moore being all mysterious. Well done!
8/26/2011 c78 Sheila Chiaroscura
I'm glad you continued updating, I was happy to find the new chapter! I'm glad to see that Ann is gaining some self-confidence, it will do her good. And the ending, with Fee dreaming of Pippa, was adorable.
I'm glad you continued updating, I was happy to find the new chapter! I'm glad to see that Ann is gaining some self-confidence, it will do her good. And the ending, with Fee dreaming of Pippa, was adorable.
8/23/2011 c79 QueenCobraWing
I like the sort of rushed way you tell this, it's more of a description than a narrative. I don't know if you intended it this way, but it shows how eager Fee is to see Pippa, and how she sort of mentally rushed through everything else.
I like the sort of rushed way you tell this, it's more of a description than a narrative. I don't know if you intended it this way, but it shows how eager Fee is to see Pippa, and how she sort of mentally rushed through everything else.
8/19/2011 c78 QueenCobraWing
Oh, poor Fee. I don't know. Anything about her fated makes me so angry.
I do like her and the sonnets. It is good to tea something cheerful for a change.
Oh, I have missed you. I was so so excited when I found the chapter.
Oh, poor Fee. I don't know. Anything about her fated makes me so angry.
I do like her and the sonnets. It is good to tea something cheerful for a change.
Oh, I have missed you. I was so so excited when I found the chapter.
8/11/2011 c77 5Sheila Chiaroscura
I simply love how you portray Felicity's and Simon's relationship, you're doing a wonderful job with this.
5Sheila ChiaroscuraI simply love how you portray Felicity's and Simon's relationship, you're doing a wonderful job with this.
8/1/2011 c77 QueenCobraWing
Oh, god, that must have hurt. I hope your teeth and mouth are OK now.
I do not care for Simon much, and he might be the firs character in the trilogy I don't like. But I really really like your Simon, who is so much... nicer, I suppose, and more caring than how he is portrayed in the books, just like Mrs. Worthington. It is kind of him to think about Fee, although I daresay he went too far in calling her a whore. But honestly, she brought I upon herself by being so contrary. Whatever.
And dear Ann! She is sweet. I hope Fee pressured her into getting the hat :)
Oh, god, that must have hurt. I hope your teeth and mouth are OK now.
I do not care for Simon much, and he might be the firs character in the trilogy I don't like. But I really really like your Simon, who is so much... nicer, I suppose, and more caring than how he is portrayed in the books, just like Mrs. Worthington. It is kind of him to think about Fee, although I daresay he went too far in calling her a whore. But honestly, she brought I upon herself by being so contrary. Whatever.
And dear Ann! She is sweet. I hope Fee pressured her into getting the hat :)
8/1/2011 c77 1hamaiasa
:) That was great! Love the chemistry between Felicity and Simon. Very awesome :3
1hamaiasa:) That was great! Love the chemistry between Felicity and Simon. Very awesome :3
7/27/2011 c76 5Sheila Chiaroscura
Oh dear, naive Ann; I think she's just incapable of disliking anyone. And you described the tension between Fee and her parents really well. Keep it up!
5Sheila ChiaroscuraOh dear, naive Ann; I think she's just incapable of disliking anyone. And you described the tension between Fee and her parents really well. Keep it up!
7/27/2011 c75 Sheila Chiaroscura
Oh, poor Ann, she's so over-whelmed. I loved how you wrote Fee's reunion with her parents, and her mixed emotions towards her father.
Oh, poor Ann, she's so over-whelmed. I loved how you wrote Fee's reunion with her parents, and her mixed emotions towards her father.