for Forbidden3/18 c10 ev
please update!
the cliffhanger's makin' me go crazy!
please update!
the cliffhanger's makin' me go crazy!
10/18/2012 c10 Floatfoot
You know... this girl isn't actually too sue-ish. You put an original spin on the concept of forbidden daughters of Artemis falling in love with Nico. This could turn into a really interesting story, if you would drop the parody-ness.
You know... this girl isn't actually too sue-ish. You put an original spin on the concept of forbidden daughters of Artemis falling in love with Nico. This could turn into a really interesting story, if you would drop the parody-ness.
10/14/2012 c10 phantasmogoric
please update. lovely concept you have of artemis.
please update. lovely concept you have of artemis.
3/15/2012 c10 Lu 3
ahhhhh! cliffhanger! please update!
ahhhhh! cliffhanger! please update!
1/25/2012 c10 insomniacClarinetist
You're story is actually good, you know. And Atalanta isn't even close to a Mary Sue. Just saying.
~Star*
You're story is actually good, you know. And Atalanta isn't even close to a Mary Sue. Just saying.
~Star*
1/21/2012 c1 Daughter of Oceanus
I dont mean to sound mean... but this is the best Artemis story Ive read... And this is a freakin Mary Sue! I get wht you mean...Artemis having a child is unoriginal and to over done to be intresting now. Only one other story of Artemis's child can rival yours to me and thats Broken Promises,Trying To Remember, and Lisdan by TheMeg-hanSolo. Its actually pretty good! But some aren't...not pointing fingers.
I dont mean to sound mean... but this is the best Artemis story Ive read... And this is a freakin Mary Sue! I get wht you mean...Artemis having a child is unoriginal and to over done to be intresting now. Only one other story of Artemis's child can rival yours to me and thats Broken Promises,Trying To Remember, and Lisdan by TheMeg-hanSolo. Its actually pretty good! But some aren't...not pointing fingers.
12/2/2011 c9 Cayre Cruz
this is an interesting story. please update!
this is an interesting story. please update!
9/14/2011 c9 Yzzie Maerys Leighson
WHEN R U GOING 2 UPDAAAAAATE? :)) ... hehehe. i know. i hav the weirdest name ever... :)
WHEN R U GOING 2 UPDAAAAAATE? :)) ... hehehe. i know. i hav the weirdest name ever... :)
5/20/2011 c1 A Darker Heaven and Hell
Out of all of the Artemis has a child stories I read so far, this one is the best.
Out of all of the Artemis has a child stories I read so far, this one is the best.
5/14/2011 c8 Artemis
Nice chap it's awesome well that's all I have to say or type.
Nice chap it's awesome well that's all I have to say or type.
5/10/2011 c8 
3PERCY x HERA
i like where you are going with this the only thing is your chapters are to short
3PERCY x HERAi like where you are going with this the only thing is your chapters are to short
4/27/2011 c1 14Alexandria Kennedy
Actually, even if Atalanta did take up Artemis's offer to become a Hunter, she would be turned immortal anyway. All Hunters are blessed/cursed with the gift of immortality. I wrote a fanfic about a daughter of Artemis, and I made it so it actually made sense, unlike this one...Which I know you made so that it is Mary Sue and stupid. Thank you so much for making fun of daughter of Artemis stories. That means you made fun of mine. Mine was original, too, though. I have never read another daughter of Artemis story. Ever. I uploaded mine because I thought that no one else had written something like that. I also uploaded it because I liked it. Turns out my story was just a piece of ** according to you. So I guess if one of my stories suck, they all do. Guess what world! I just discovered I SUCK at writing, even though people tell me I'm good. I guess I should delete all of my stories. Thank you for making me realize I'm such a ** writer. I'll be sure to delete everything I have ever published on fanfiction.net. Bye, and once again thank you.
14Alexandria KennedyActually, even if Atalanta did take up Artemis's offer to become a Hunter, she would be turned immortal anyway. All Hunters are blessed/cursed with the gift of immortality. I wrote a fanfic about a daughter of Artemis, and I made it so it actually made sense, unlike this one...Which I know you made so that it is Mary Sue and stupid. Thank you so much for making fun of daughter of Artemis stories. That means you made fun of mine. Mine was original, too, though. I have never read another daughter of Artemis story. Ever. I uploaded mine because I thought that no one else had written something like that. I also uploaded it because I liked it. Turns out my story was just a piece of ** according to you. So I guess if one of my stories suck, they all do. Guess what world! I just discovered I SUCK at writing, even though people tell me I'm good. I guess I should delete all of my stories. Thank you for making me realize I'm such a ** writer. I'll be sure to delete everything I have ever published on fanfiction.net. Bye, and once again thank you.
4/26/2011 c7 Artemis the Moon Maiden
Great chapter your writing talent amazes me.It's wonderfull update soon.
Great chapter your writing talent amazes me.It's wonderfull update soon.