for The Valiant's Confession3/9/2012 c1 
2MCH
Never thought that Lucy would need to forgive her brother. But the more I think about it the more you story makes sense. You can love somebody very much but you don't like what they have done.
Interesting. Nice story to.
2MCHNever thought that Lucy would need to forgive her brother. But the more I think about it the more you story makes sense. You can love somebody very much but you don't like what they have done.
Interesting. Nice story to.
9/28/2011 c1 4labonath151
Simply phenomenal! What a wonderful story that I read, longing for the next word. The ending was slightly abrupt, but other than that, it was an interesting story that added a lot to the world of Narnia. Thank you for it!
4labonath151Simply phenomenal! What a wonderful story that I read, longing for the next word. The ending was slightly abrupt, but other than that, it was an interesting story that added a lot to the world of Narnia. Thank you for it!
4/25/2011 c1 2tapdancer10
Lovely story. Well written, too. Very nice Edmund/Lucy interaction, I always believe she forgave him and easily, too.
2tapdancer10Lovely story. Well written, too. Very nice Edmund/Lucy interaction, I always believe she forgave him and easily, too.