for solemn oath4/15/2011 c1 
1LSwann
Ooh I like this! It surprised me when Jack just took hold of her shoulder and she 'didn't' pull away telling him how inappropriate he was. Poor Lizzy, she obviously got it really taken out of her.. and now she's so lonely. I do hope you have more chapters to this.. i could see something very.. hm.. strange developing in between these two if Will continues being like he is.
1LSwannOoh I like this! It surprised me when Jack just took hold of her shoulder and she 'didn't' pull away telling him how inappropriate he was. Poor Lizzy, she obviously got it really taken out of her.. and now she's so lonely. I do hope you have more chapters to this.. i could see something very.. hm.. strange developing in between these two if Will continues being like he is.