for The War For Enduron Prime9/22/2011 c9 survivor686
No...Not Axel
No...Not Axel
7/15/2011 c8 Anonymous
A good story, reasonably good spelling. Interesting to hook me as a reader, looking forward to more chapters.
A good story, reasonably good spelling. Interesting to hook me as a reader, looking forward to more chapters.
6/21/2011 c7 jarhead762
Soooo. Lemme get this straight...the m40 which is q custom Remington 700(?), plus 40k years=still great weapon?
Soooo. Lemme get this straight...the m40 which is q custom Remington 700(?), plus 40k years=still great weapon?
5/1/2011 c2 BIBOTOT
Man ! Even among the Inmperium army there are still some pretty mad men. Good story, man.
Man ! Even among the Inmperium army there are still some pretty mad men. Good story, man.
5/1/2011 c1 BIBOTOT
76.58% of the guardsmen are dead ? That is so harsh.
76.58% of the guardsmen are dead ? That is so harsh.
5/1/2011 c5 
3Colonel-Commissar2468
I loved the Terminator reference! I love this story, it's awesome. Please keep updating.
3Colonel-Commissar2468I loved the Terminator reference! I love this story, it's awesome. Please keep updating.
4/29/2011 c3 insubstantialwitness
Very much like the story, very imaginative and good characterisation. I hope you continue it further.
Very much like the story, very imaginative and good characterisation. I hope you continue it further.
4/23/2011 c3 Space wolf
Write more
Write more
4/17/2011 c3 Awesome Tode
Well, 'karskin-Ghost' i thought it was really well thought out and the detail is great I can't wait for the other chapters. It's a great read and i would recomend this story to other people.
Well, 'karskin-Ghost' i thought it was really well thought out and the detail is great I can't wait for the other chapters. It's a great read and i would recomend this story to other people.
4/6/2011 c2 The Templar
:D thanks for using the name! also i noticed you used other names from different games :P cant wait for chapter three
:D thanks for using the name! also i noticed you used other names from different games :P cant wait for chapter three
4/5/2011 c2 warhammer lover
ok you got me, now i have to read it all. good job!
ok you got me, now i have to read it all. good job!
4/4/2011 c1 The Templar
well for a first story it was good, i liked the computer entry, Siear could be a name :3
well for a first story it was good, i liked the computer entry, Siear could be a name :3