1/1 c9 abigail
aww i love kevin and joanna, they are so nice even to michael who was a stranger at first

6/27/2011 c9 1skinnerbox27
r u kiddding. i think u just spoiled him. nd that talk was great.

6/27/2011 c4 skinnerbox27
yet,i liked this chapter the best wat 2 go

4/19/2011 c1 11elizabeth's lullaby
Hey this is a good idea, but there are a few things in there that are a bit distracting, like a few words missed out etc. Sorry to be a pain, but that's how it is! Just proof read again and again, and then get someone else to!

4/14/2011 c1 1scooterlover13
Love it! i like how it is in micheals point of view! not mias!could edit some spelling errors. not a big deal though!

4/12/2011 c3 MM Lover
I love it! Just don't forget to finish it cause I hate it when people don't finish their fic.