for I've Got You Under My Skin4/24/2011 c4 Anonymous
OH. MY. GOSH.
You officially have got me hooked on D/G. Keep up the good work!
OH. MY. GOSH.
You officially have got me hooked on D/G. Keep up the good work!
4/24/2011 c4 
41TuesdayNovember
Ohmigoodness.
Kiles, I'm repeating what I said yesterday - you're incredible. You characterized the two of them perfectly (as usual ^^) and when Draco went to propose, I was nervous alongside him, and WHAT a twist there! Ginny being married to Harry, I was NOT expecting that at all. But I liked that you did that - it made what would have otherwise been a nice, cute little fluffy romance fic into something with more depth and drama, which I love.
And then the way it ended was just perfect. Cute and sweet and just lovely. I haven't seen Casablanca (shame!) but I'm guessing Ginny's last line was a quote from the movie? Either way, I loved it.
I really do love your writing style, it's superb. ^^
41TuesdayNovemberOhmigoodness.
Kiles, I'm repeating what I said yesterday - you're incredible. You characterized the two of them perfectly (as usual ^^) and when Draco went to propose, I was nervous alongside him, and WHAT a twist there! Ginny being married to Harry, I was NOT expecting that at all. But I liked that you did that - it made what would have otherwise been a nice, cute little fluffy romance fic into something with more depth and drama, which I love.
And then the way it ended was just perfect. Cute and sweet and just lovely. I haven't seen Casablanca (shame!) but I'm guessing Ginny's last line was a quote from the movie? Either way, I loved it.
I really do love your writing style, it's superb. ^^
4/23/2011 c3 TuesdayNovember
Oh Kiles. Oh, oh Kiles. =(
Have I told you lately that you're an incredible writer? Because you really are. This has to be one of the most tragic, beautiful and romantic things I've read in a very long time.
Draco's loyalty to Ginny, even after she's lost her memory and it seems everyone else has abandoned her is absolutely beautiful. And the fact that everyone else has pretty much just left her is absolutely tragic - I feel part of it is less the fact that they don't care for her, and more the fact that Draco does, even after all those years. =(
This was incredibly well written, heartbreaking and sweet. I absolutely adored it.
Oh Kiles. Oh, oh Kiles. =(
Have I told you lately that you're an incredible writer? Because you really are. This has to be one of the most tragic, beautiful and romantic things I've read in a very long time.
Draco's loyalty to Ginny, even after she's lost her memory and it seems everyone else has abandoned her is absolutely beautiful. And the fact that everyone else has pretty much just left her is absolutely tragic - I feel part of it is less the fact that they don't care for her, and more the fact that Draco does, even after all those years. =(
This was incredibly well written, heartbreaking and sweet. I absolutely adored it.
4/22/2011 c4 6idoitforlove
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This is so cute, but I didn't like the Ginny and Harry cheating on eachother, because I want Draco to be the first one to marry Ginny, but you thats just me!Lol. Loved this chappie! Please update soon!
6idoitforloveAwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This is so cute, but I didn't like the Ginny and Harry cheating on eachother, because I want Draco to be the first one to marry Ginny, but you thats just me!Lol. Loved this chappie! Please update soon!
4/22/2011 c2 41TuesdayNovember
Okay, I loved this.
I don't think it came across as hurried and jumbled at all. In fact, I thought the pacing was just right, and the ending was great, in my opinion.
What I most loved about this is how incredibly in character the both of them are - they're so realistic here. And your descriptions were perfect, I could see everything happening in vivid detail (especially the "peeling bar stool, which belched large amounts of stuffing every time she adjusted her position" ugh, I know what that's like. And such a great was of saying it!)
I thought it was a little hilarious that Draco spoke with parentheses, but that's the sort of thing you see in old stories with pompous Victorian people, and it sort of fits, in a strange way.
So anyway, I thought this was very well done, and the ending was quite profound. I loved it! ^^
41TuesdayNovemberOkay, I loved this.
I don't think it came across as hurried and jumbled at all. In fact, I thought the pacing was just right, and the ending was great, in my opinion.
What I most loved about this is how incredibly in character the both of them are - they're so realistic here. And your descriptions were perfect, I could see everything happening in vivid detail (especially the "peeling bar stool, which belched large amounts of stuffing every time she adjusted her position" ugh, I know what that's like. And such a great was of saying it!)
I thought it was a little hilarious that Draco spoke with parentheses, but that's the sort of thing you see in old stories with pompous Victorian people, and it sort of fits, in a strange way.
So anyway, I thought this was very well done, and the ending was quite profound. I loved it! ^^
4/21/2011 c1 11DoubleCaramel
Oh, this made me smile. A sad smile - because I did not like the ending, no. *pouts*
But, in my head, in the future they find each other again and Ginny learns about /the/ smile and they live happily ever after in the bliss of forever. Well, a less lame version of that - a snarky version with banter. Yummy banter. And pink haired babies. Yes.
Anyway - I liked this. You created something original with the sentence and it suited it perfectly. Not what I thought initially when I read the sentence, which is great because it shows how differently we can interpret a sentence and a scenario.
All of this is to say I enjoyed your drabble! Well done!
11DoubleCaramelOh, this made me smile. A sad smile - because I did not like the ending, no. *pouts*
But, in my head, in the future they find each other again and Ginny learns about /the/ smile and they live happily ever after in the bliss of forever. Well, a less lame version of that - a snarky version with banter. Yummy banter. And pink haired babies. Yes.
Anyway - I liked this. You created something original with the sentence and it suited it perfectly. Not what I thought initially when I read the sentence, which is great because it shows how differently we can interpret a sentence and a scenario.
All of this is to say I enjoyed your drabble! Well done!
4/20/2011 c3 6idoitforlove
Awwwwwwww! I thought this was adorable and I love your writing style, your to point but you make it a bit mysterious too! I was guessing until I read the part about greying hair, which explains alot but nothing as well (which is good!). I like the part where he sings her happy birthday, I thought it was so loving and cute! Anyhoo! Keep writing these please! I love it!
6idoitforloveAwwwwwwww! I thought this was adorable and I love your writing style, your to point but you make it a bit mysterious too! I was guessing until I read the part about greying hair, which explains alot but nothing as well (which is good!). I like the part where he sings her happy birthday, I thought it was so loving and cute! Anyhoo! Keep writing these please! I love it!
4/16/2011 c2 idoitforlove
This is good, it's short, but it has a deep meaning to it and I really liked that, hope you update soon:D
This is good, it's short, but it has a deep meaning to it and I really liked that, hope you update soon:D
4/13/2011 c1 2Callidora-Malfoy
Hey Kiles!
I really enjoyed this, it was completely different to what I was expecting, but let's just say it was an excellent surprise.
You really convey Ginny's addiction, and the fact that she wants more from their relationship - if you can call it that - and that she feels slightly used.
I liked the way you made it realistic and I think that the title was fitting, I can just see how annoyed Ginny is that she had let someone get to her like that.
I though it was really lovely - albeit a little dark. BUT, I think the slightly darker stance you took on this made it that much more awesome.
One line that I thought was particularly powerful was:
"it is always three minutes."
The fact that it is so precise and so ingrained, it somehow quite sad and down right depressing.
~Maria ^_^
2Callidora-MalfoyHey Kiles!
I really enjoyed this, it was completely different to what I was expecting, but let's just say it was an excellent surprise.
You really convey Ginny's addiction, and the fact that she wants more from their relationship - if you can call it that - and that she feels slightly used.
I liked the way you made it realistic and I think that the title was fitting, I can just see how annoyed Ginny is that she had let someone get to her like that.
I though it was really lovely - albeit a little dark. BUT, I think the slightly darker stance you took on this made it that much more awesome.
One line that I thought was particularly powerful was:
"it is always three minutes."
The fact that it is so precise and so ingrained, it somehow quite sad and down right depressing.
~Maria ^_^
4/13/2011 c1 13hannah askance
Ooh, I really liked this, Kiles. Being dirty-minded as I can be *cough* you had my attention from the first sentence.
*ahem* Anyway.
I liked how you used the sentence - instead of fluff, it's a very emotion-filled drabble, and in spite of what you said, I think you did a great job in characterizing both Ginny and Draco. I find both their attitudes and thoughts (and, in Draco's case, sneaky smiles) characteristic of them.
The way you ended it made me want to wail "What happened next?" but I suppose it's a good thing you don't tell us. It's a very effective way to end it, but that, you know, was *such* a teaser.
I enjoyed reading this. Lovely work, Kiles!
13hannah askanceOoh, I really liked this, Kiles. Being dirty-minded as I can be *cough* you had my attention from the first sentence.
*ahem* Anyway.
I liked how you used the sentence - instead of fluff, it's a very emotion-filled drabble, and in spite of what you said, I think you did a great job in characterizing both Ginny and Draco. I find both their attitudes and thoughts (and, in Draco's case, sneaky smiles) characteristic of them.
The way you ended it made me want to wail "What happened next?" but I suppose it's a good thing you don't tell us. It's a very effective way to end it, but that, you know, was *such* a teaser.
I enjoyed reading this. Lovely work, Kiles!
4/10/2011 c1 41TuesdayNovember
Oh wow! This went in a completely different direction than I expected it would! Much darker and brooding than the sort of romantic comedy I was expecting at the start! This was very nicely done - you contracted Draco and Ginny wonderfully, and this ended on a very mournful note. Not melodramatic or overdone, just right.
I also especially liked the line "it is always three minutes" because there's something terribly depressing about the repetition of that exact time, every time...
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that this was very well done, and I loved it! =)
41TuesdayNovemberOh wow! This went in a completely different direction than I expected it would! Much darker and brooding than the sort of romantic comedy I was expecting at the start! This was very nicely done - you contracted Draco and Ginny wonderfully, and this ended on a very mournful note. Not melodramatic or overdone, just right.
I also especially liked the line "it is always three minutes" because there's something terribly depressing about the repetition of that exact time, every time...
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that this was very well done, and I loved it! =)
4/9/2011 c1 36TASHAx
I really enjoyed this. I loved the miscommunication between their two vibes and attitudes to their trysts. I think the title is perfect too, because Draco is clearly under Ginny's skin and she thinks of this as like...an addiction and Draco obviously (in my romantic head, anyway) quite like her and she's sort of growing on him in a positive light.
It's really lovely.
This phrase "It was like her life was chopped up into little pieces, each one stringing behind the other in a line until they came to that sacred, private closet, and there her existence was content, for she was wound protectively in his arms, exchanging the most delightful, sweet, impassioned kisses." was particuarly wonderful. Good work :)
36TASHAxI really enjoyed this. I loved the miscommunication between their two vibes and attitudes to their trysts. I think the title is perfect too, because Draco is clearly under Ginny's skin and she thinks of this as like...an addiction and Draco obviously (in my romantic head, anyway) quite like her and she's sort of growing on him in a positive light.
It's really lovely.
This phrase "It was like her life was chopped up into little pieces, each one stringing behind the other in a line until they came to that sacred, private closet, and there her existence was content, for she was wound protectively in his arms, exchanging the most delightful, sweet, impassioned kisses." was particuarly wonderful. Good work :)
4/8/2011 c1 15rowan-greenleaf
I really liked this. First of all, I liked that given the humorous vibe of starlit's sentence you would expect a fun romance/humor drabble to be inspired by it, but you went totally dark with it and took it in a completely different direction.
I like that as you're reading it, you can clearly see a picture of both Draco and Ginny in this situation. She wants more, she's feeling used, but she's addicted to him and she hates herself for it because she thinks he doesn't care. He's enjoying himself and being lighthearted about it, but it doesn't mean that he doesn't care. In fact, if he knew what she was thinking, he'd probably be hurt.
It's so...realistic. Lol. Sadly, yes.
It's beautifully written, and that last line adds an element of foreboding that sort of makes it all become tinged with a sort of melancholy. I would love for this to become an actual fic. Any chance of that?
Great job. ^_^
15rowan-greenleafI really liked this. First of all, I liked that given the humorous vibe of starlit's sentence you would expect a fun romance/humor drabble to be inspired by it, but you went totally dark with it and took it in a completely different direction.
I like that as you're reading it, you can clearly see a picture of both Draco and Ginny in this situation. She wants more, she's feeling used, but she's addicted to him and she hates herself for it because she thinks he doesn't care. He's enjoying himself and being lighthearted about it, but it doesn't mean that he doesn't care. In fact, if he knew what she was thinking, he'd probably be hurt.
It's so...realistic. Lol. Sadly, yes.
It's beautifully written, and that last line adds an element of foreboding that sort of makes it all become tinged with a sort of melancholy. I would love for this to become an actual fic. Any chance of that?
Great job. ^_^
4/7/2011 c1 71Boogum
Ooo, I liked this. Makes me wish there was more!
Of course, in my head Ginny is going to realise one day that Draco likes her too, and then they'll start dating, then married, and have lots of pink-haired babies. Yay!
Seriously though, I liked this drabble. Particularly this line: /It was like her life was chopped up into little pieces, each one stringing behind the other in a line until they came to that sacred, private closet/
71BoogumOoo, I liked this. Makes me wish there was more!
Of course, in my head Ginny is going to realise one day that Draco likes her too, and then they'll start dating, then married, and have lots of pink-haired babies. Yay!
Seriously though, I liked this drabble. Particularly this line: /It was like her life was chopped up into little pieces, each one stringing behind the other in a line until they came to that sacred, private closet/