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1JenRoxanne
You astound me. I read BucketGirl's POV first & I couldn't get it off my mind all day. I am going thru all your other posted stories & reading them & squealed out loud when I found this. And love it just as much if not more. I loved his detachment of others yet his attachment toward her. He isn't used to these emotions but considering it all, he handled it the best way he knew how. He let her in. I love these 2 characters & their interaction. I have a feeling this 'version' will be on my mind today as the other was on mine yesterday. Xoxo You're an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing with us.
1JenRoxanneYou astound me. I read BucketGirl's POV first & I couldn't get it off my mind all day. I am going thru all your other posted stories & reading them & squealed out loud when I found this. And love it just as much if not more. I loved his detachment of others yet his attachment toward her. He isn't used to these emotions but considering it all, he handled it the best way he knew how. He let her in. I love these 2 characters & their interaction. I have a feeling this 'version' will be on my mind today as the other was on mine yesterday. Xoxo You're an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing with us.
1/14 c1 Aljxa
This is as great as the first. Tnx for sharing it and i'm keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel...it could happen...plz.
This is as great as the first. Tnx for sharing it and i'm keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel...it could happen...plz.
12/17/2012 c1 Pankeka
Wow... it was a great to get to know what was going though his head the whole time... and that he was as crazy, selfish, & emotionally detached but somehow endearing as I thought him to be.
Thank you for sharing this FGB outtake!
Wow... it was a great to get to know what was going though his head the whole time... and that he was as crazy, selfish, & emotionally detached but somehow endearing as I thought him to be.
Thank you for sharing this FGB outtake!
12/5/2012 c1 1BelleOfTheBook
Incredibly well-written, incredibly visual... Just an incredible story in general. :)
1BelleOfTheBookIncredibly well-written, incredibly visual... Just an incredible story in general. :)
10/12/2012 c1 quisha1991
His version is better on the feelings side... I love the turmoil he went through with trying to find out if she was good enough to save... We still don't know her real name
His version is better on the feelings side... I love the turmoil he went through with trying to find out if she was good enough to save... We still don't know her real name
6/28/2012 c1 3LadyLibra12
Simply brilliant. I love SGPOV a little more than Bucket Girl's, just because I love his twisted mind. Your intelligence shows throught your work, not many people could have been able to pull off this kind of tale. Just like BGPOV it was written beautifully and certainly didn't disappoint!
3LadyLibra12Simply brilliant. I love SGPOV a little more than Bucket Girl's, just because I love his twisted mind. Your intelligence shows throught your work, not many people could have been able to pull off this kind of tale. Just like BGPOV it was written beautifully and certainly didn't disappoint!
6/2/2012 c1 alisonwords20
loved it loved it loved it loved it, and whos to say they died they could have made it. (i hope then there could be a sequel)
loved it loved it loved it loved it, and whos to say they died they could have made it. (i hope then there could be a sequel)
4/18/2012 c1 Hopeforautism
One of the best, twisted stories I've ever read! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for that!
One of the best, twisted stories I've ever read! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for that!
4/3/2012 c1 3LadyLeech
I lack the words to describe how I feel right now. I will try and begin with the feelings that have a name. That way I, you or the world can't say I didnt try.
Well, WASTE. I think to not have people like you writting as professionals and publishing books for the world to see is an inconceiveable WASTE. It PAINS me; truthfully does.
LOVE. I LOVE it. LOVE. True, odd love. With the admiration even with the acknowledgment of flaws, the sense of fulfillment when near, when over, when reading... the adrenaline of wild sex and the peacefulness of the after match. Instinct bringing every reaction to our body before our neurons have the chance to make sense of anything... It was all here. And there, within you.
GRATITUDE. For having the guts, the imagination, the brains, the time and putting what is bound to be a whole lotta effort into writting this outstanding, splendid, illegaly tasty fic.
Will be licking my lips and fingers for a long while, thanks to you. And thank bloody you.
A long peck on the cheek and a head massage,
B.
3LadyLeechI lack the words to describe how I feel right now. I will try and begin with the feelings that have a name. That way I, you or the world can't say I didnt try.
Well, WASTE. I think to not have people like you writting as professionals and publishing books for the world to see is an inconceiveable WASTE. It PAINS me; truthfully does.
LOVE. I LOVE it. LOVE. True, odd love. With the admiration even with the acknowledgment of flaws, the sense of fulfillment when near, when over, when reading... the adrenaline of wild sex and the peacefulness of the after match. Instinct bringing every reaction to our body before our neurons have the chance to make sense of anything... It was all here. And there, within you.
GRATITUDE. For having the guts, the imagination, the brains, the time and putting what is bound to be a whole lotta effort into writting this outstanding, splendid, illegaly tasty fic.
Will be licking my lips and fingers for a long while, thanks to you. And thank bloody you.
A long peck on the cheek and a head massage,
B.
3/15/2012 c1 malleelee
I have searched for promise of a less disastrous finality in this POV story. Nope. Isn't there. I enjoyed the view into Edward's thoughts, particularly about Bella. I am having difficulty saying goodbye to story. I am looking for the miracle. Excellent story. Thank you for writing.
I have searched for promise of a less disastrous finality in this POV story. Nope. Isn't there. I enjoyed the view into Edward's thoughts, particularly about Bella. I am having difficulty saying goodbye to story. I am looking for the miracle. Excellent story. Thank you for writing.