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3JDP95
He shot at Reep? Kei'aysen's having some trouble. I'm loving the Tamaran fight tho :)
3JDP95He shot at Reep? Kei'aysen's having some trouble. I'm loving the Tamaran fight tho :)
6/4/2011 c52 JDP95
Mogo! I like Mogo. He's cool. Things are really heating up, and most planets have already taken a side. Should be fun!
Mogo! I like Mogo. He's cool. Things are really heating up, and most planets have already taken a side. Should be fun!
6/3/2011 c51 JDP95
Idk if the Legion telling all the Ambassadors was a good thing or bad thing. Most of 'em seemed to listen, but some of them didn't. And what happened to Saturn Girl? What's she seeing/sensing?
Idk if the Legion telling all the Ambassadors was a good thing or bad thing. Most of 'em seemed to listen, but some of them didn't. And what happened to Saturn Girl? What's she seeing/sensing?
6/2/2011 c50 JDP95
Brainy always has a trick up his sleeve. Thats what makes him so interesting. Great chapter. I kinda wish you would have shown more of the fight with the Fatal Five, but great chapter nonetheless.
Brainy always has a trick up his sleeve. Thats what makes him so interesting. Great chapter. I kinda wish you would have shown more of the fight with the Fatal Five, but great chapter nonetheless.
5/31/2011 c48 JDP95
Oohhhh, things are really getting interesting now! Have I ever told you I love this story? Cause I do! It's awesome! Can't wait for the next part!
Oohhhh, things are really getting interesting now! Have I ever told you I love this story? Cause I do! It's awesome! Can't wait for the next part!
5/30/2011 c47 JDP95
Good chapter. I liked the different scenes with all the different Knights. Keep up the good work.
Good chapter. I liked the different scenes with all the different Knights. Keep up the good work.
5/29/2011 c46 JDP95
Lone Wolf. I like it :) Nice fight scenes. The Fatal Five was well written as was the Red X/Lone Wolf fight. Awesome work :) I'm loving the Knights so far! :D
Lone Wolf. I like it :) Nice fight scenes. The Fatal Five was well written as was the Red X/Lone Wolf fight. Awesome work :) I'm loving the Knights so far! :D
5/28/2011 c45 JDP95
Sweettt. More Knights :) I'm happy now. It's gonna be fun to find out what really happened. Awesome job on the chapter!
Sweettt. More Knights :) I'm happy now. It's gonna be fun to find out what really happened. Awesome job on the chapter!
5/27/2011 c44 JDP95
Aww that chapter was really short :( I like his name though. Nightsun. Pretty cool guys.
Aww that chapter was really short :( I like his name though. Nightsun. Pretty cool guys.
5/26/2011 c43 JDP95
Cosmic Wave is the kidnapper? No wonder he's been avoiding all the others. I have been looking at the artwork. It helps me to see the story because you changed costumes and things, so it provides a nice visual to go along with the story. I haven't been listening to the music, though. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens to Cosmic Wave.
Cosmic Wave is the kidnapper? No wonder he's been avoiding all the others. I have been looking at the artwork. It helps me to see the story because you changed costumes and things, so it provides a nice visual to go along with the story. I haven't been listening to the music, though. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens to Cosmic Wave.
5/25/2011 c42 JDP95
How'd he end up in the hospital? -.- so mysterious. Great chapter. you guys write so well and I can see the story perfectly in my head. Awesome job :)
How'd he end up in the hospital? -.- so mysterious. Great chapter. you guys write so well and I can see the story perfectly in my head. Awesome job :)
5/24/2011 c41 JDP95
Looks like the Legion's having trouble when spread so thin. Nothing seems to be going right and Cosmic Boy's acting weird and avoiding everyone... More mysterys.
Looks like the Legion's having trouble when spread so thin. Nothing seems to be going right and Cosmic Boy's acting weird and avoiding everyone... More mysterys.
5/22/2011 c40 JDP95
The Legion's getting serious now. The Neo Kobra Cult must be really good if they can escape half a dozen Legionnaires. Looks like their's gonna be trouble
The Legion's getting serious now. The Neo Kobra Cult must be really good if they can escape half a dozen Legionnaires. Looks like their's gonna be trouble
5/21/2011 c39 JDP95
The Fatal Five. I always liked them. They're pretty cool. Awesome fights. I like how you highlighted Diamond's inability to keep fighting for long periods of time. It gave us some insight into the character and explained why she can't always fight like the other Legionnaires. Awesome chapter!
The Fatal Five. I always liked them. They're pretty cool. Awesome fights. I like how you highlighted Diamond's inability to keep fighting for long periods of time. It gave us some insight into the character and explained why she can't always fight like the other Legionnaires. Awesome chapter!
