for Areté 1: The Rebirth of Valor5/20/2011 c38 
3JDP95
Uh ohh... Delegates fighting could mean war, right? I don't know or care to know a lot about politics, but if something gets bad enough, they can go to war. Not good for the Legion!
3JDP95Uh ohh... Delegates fighting could mean war, right? I don't know or care to know a lot about politics, but if something gets bad enough, they can go to war. Not good for the Legion!
5/19/2011 c37 JDP95
Now the fun begins? The fun began back in episode one! I'm glad Reep joined the Legion as a trainee. He was awesome! Shape shifting would be a very usueful power. Can't wait for the next episode!
Now the fun begins? The fun began back in episode one! I'm glad Reep joined the Legion as a trainee. He was awesome! Shape shifting would be a very usueful power. Can't wait for the next episode!
5/18/2011 c36 JDP95
Team versus Team! I wanna see this fight! And I hope Reep wins so he can prove to Brainy he can make a good Legionnaire and that he'll join! Also, nice side note with Superman. Have any plans of bringing him back? OOhhh, maybe since the Knights are 'Batmen', you can bring Bruce to the future with Supes! Just an idea xP
Team versus Team! I wanna see this fight! And I hope Reep wins so he can prove to Brainy he can make a good Legionnaire and that he'll join! Also, nice side note with Superman. Have any plans of bringing him back? OOhhh, maybe since the Knights are 'Batmen', you can bring Bruce to the future with Supes! Just an idea xP
5/17/2011 c7 leath
Of course, the Fatal Five. Classic. Loved the end scene for this chapter.
Of course, the Fatal Five. Classic. Loved the end scene for this chapter.
5/17/2011 c35 JDP95
I feel sorry for Reep. The kid deserves to be a Legionnaire. He just needs a chance to prove himself. I hope he becomes a Legionnaire eventually. I do like Kei'aysen. I think he's an interesting addition to the Legion/Knights dynamic. Keep up the awesome work!
I feel sorry for Reep. The kid deserves to be a Legionnaire. He just needs a chance to prove himself. I hope he becomes a Legionnaire eventually. I do like Kei'aysen. I think he's an interesting addition to the Legion/Knights dynamic. Keep up the awesome work!
5/17/2011 c2 10RiverLake
Mirror's Mirage - Even by first chapter, I can tell...you're GOOD...will read the rest after my exams
Peonywinx - YOU! only as your beloved cousin I am reading the first chapter less than 24 hours before my exam, so be THANKFUL. I PROMISE I'll read the rest after I am back to the carefree person I am AFTER the exams
looking forward to reading the rest! ;)
10RiverLakeMirror's Mirage - Even by first chapter, I can tell...you're GOOD...will read the rest after my exams
Peonywinx - YOU! only as your beloved cousin I am reading the first chapter less than 24 hours before my exam, so be THANKFUL. I PROMISE I'll read the rest after I am back to the carefree person I am AFTER the exams
looking forward to reading the rest! ;)
5/17/2011 c1 RiverLake
to Peonywinx - sorry I'm late (i have other things to do, and FYI: my exam begins tomorrow. THAT is why I haven't been reading lately)
to Peonywinx - sorry I'm late (i have other things to do, and FYI: my exam begins tomorrow. THAT is why I haven't been reading lately)
5/16/2011 c34 3JDP95
To Poenywinx: Well you did a good job with them :) They have an interesting power set that makes them different from all the other characters you have in the story.
Tricky stuff with Saturn Girl and Gaia and their aliases. I was confused there for a bit :P Is Alyss McGuinis Terry's daughter? Hmm... can't wait for the next chapter!
3JDP95To Poenywinx: Well you did a good job with them :) They have an interesting power set that makes them different from all the other characters you have in the story.
Tricky stuff with Saturn Girl and Gaia and their aliases. I was confused there for a bit :P Is Alyss McGuinis Terry's daughter? Hmm... can't wait for the next chapter!
5/14/2011 c33 JDP95
That was smart thinking, hitting the weed all in the same spot. Vision and Shadowhawk are pretty cool. You keep surprising me with how awesome your characters are. Can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great work!
That was smart thinking, hitting the weed all in the same spot. Vision and Shadowhawk are pretty cool. You keep surprising me with how awesome your characters are. Can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great work!
5/13/2011 c32 JDP95
They disappeared! That's very mysterious. You guys have a habit of mysterious cliffhangers. I like the new recruits and I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Arete is awesome and I hope you keep it going for a long time!
They disappeared! That's very mysterious. You guys have a habit of mysterious cliffhangers. I like the new recruits and I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Arete is awesome and I hope you keep it going for a long time!
5/12/2011 c6 leath
Legion tryouts. Always funny. I like this chap. Btw, did you forget Blok or is he the cause of the fuss? Guess I'll find out.
Legion tryouts. Always funny. I like this chap. Btw, did you forget Blok or is he the cause of the fuss? Guess I'll find out.
5/11/2011 c30 JDP95
He didn't join! :( That's kind of depressing :S I like Timber Wolf.Anyways, good epilogue. Very informative. It gives a little more background on Backlash and why he doesn't like the Science Police. Keep up the good work!
He didn't join! :( That's kind of depressing :S I like Timber Wolf.Anyways, good epilogue. Very informative. It gives a little more background on Backlash and why he doesn't like the Science Police. Keep up the good work!
5/10/2011 c5 leath
I am liking this Legion lineup. Should prove interesting. And I loved the Mogo reference, he's one of my favorite GLs.
I am liking this Legion lineup. Should prove interesting. And I loved the Mogo reference, he's one of my favorite GLs.
5/10/2011 c29 JDP95
Good chapter. The new guys aren't getting along so well, are they? I hope Brin stays, but I like his whole "annoy me and die" attitude. It adds a new dimension to the Legion. They now have a brutal memeber that could kill without feeling guilty.
Good chapter. The new guys aren't getting along so well, are they? I hope Brin stays, but I like his whole "annoy me and die" attitude. It adds a new dimension to the Legion. They now have a brutal memeber that could kill without feeling guilty.