for Areté 1: The Rebirth of Valor5/9/2011 c28 
3JDP95
I half guessed Backlash was an OC, but I wasn't sure -.- Cool chapter. Chemical King looks like he's going to need time to adjust to the Legion. Same with Brin. I like Brin a lot, and I liked the bath parts of the chapter. They were very enjoyable. I'm also guessing Ultimatum and Phantom Girl are dating, since Ultimatum had his arm around Phantom Girl. Very subtle with Lyle and Condo's relationship. Good job :D
3JDP95I half guessed Backlash was an OC, but I wasn't sure -.- Cool chapter. Chemical King looks like he's going to need time to adjust to the Legion. Same with Brin. I like Brin a lot, and I liked the bath parts of the chapter. They were very enjoyable. I'm also guessing Ultimatum and Phantom Girl are dating, since Ultimatum had his arm around Phantom Girl. Very subtle with Lyle and Condo's relationship. Good job :D
5/8/2011 c27 JDP95
Uh ohh... bath time! Chemical King seems interesting. Who is Backlash? I've never heard of him before. It should be interesting to find out! Can't wait for the next part!
Uh ohh... bath time! Chemical King seems interesting. Who is Backlash? I've never heard of him before. It should be interesting to find out! Can't wait for the next part!
5/6/2011 c25 JDP95
Personally, I like the Knights of Caligine better. Loved this chapter. The fights were awesome as always, although some parts, like where Diamondback gets hit with the obsidian orb, were a little confusing at first. Overall, amazing chapter as always!
Personally, I like the Knights of Caligine better. Loved this chapter. The fights were awesome as always, although some parts, like where Diamondback gets hit with the obsidian orb, were a little confusing at first. Overall, amazing chapter as always!
5/5/2011 c24 JDP95
Looks like the Njal Ambassadors know how to fight :) Awesome chapter. I'm really liking how mysterious and powerful Gaia and Arctic seem to be. They almost seem like they could beat all the Neo Kobras themselves. I also like how Arctic uses his powers. It's very creative. Instead of just freezing people, he hits them with ice and flash freezes them. Keep up the good work!
Looks like the Njal Ambassadors know how to fight :) Awesome chapter. I'm really liking how mysterious and powerful Gaia and Arctic seem to be. They almost seem like they could beat all the Neo Kobras themselves. I also like how Arctic uses his powers. It's very creative. Instead of just freezing people, he hits them with ice and flash freezes them. Keep up the good work!
5/4/2011 c23 JDP95
The footnotes are very helpful. They really help when something is new. The 3rd one helped me alot because I forgot who Jeckie was. I'm guessing that this episode will take place while Lightning and the others are still one Rawl? Cool. Can't wait for the next part!
The footnotes are very helpful. They really help when something is new. The 3rd one helped me alot because I forgot who Jeckie was. I'm guessing that this episode will take place while Lightning and the others are still one Rawl? Cool. Can't wait for the next part!
5/2/2011 c22 JDP95
Aha! I knew it was Timber Wolf! Or it might not be Timber Wolf, since you changed some of the names already. As always, awesome story arc and I can't wait for more!
Aha! I knew it was Timber Wolf! Or it might not be Timber Wolf, since you changed some of the names already. As always, awesome story arc and I can't wait for more!
5/1/2011 c21 JDP95
Wow, two injuries in one chapter. The Legion's not doing so well. I wonder how this is going to go... Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
Wow, two injuries in one chapter. The Legion's not doing so well. I wonder how this is going to go... Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
4/30/2011 c20 JDP95
Brainy is a very smart green boy :) Londo is hiding a verryyy big thing, and I wonder what Saturn Girl will find in the "creature's" mind? Who was that woman Saturn Girl saw in the dream? So many questions!
Brainy is a very smart green boy :) Londo is hiding a verryyy big thing, and I wonder what Saturn Girl will find in the "creature's" mind? Who was that woman Saturn Girl saw in the dream? So many questions!
4/29/2011 c4 leath
Now it's time to kick the Legion into high gear. This story's getting good.
Now it's time to kick the Legion into high gear. This story's getting good.
4/29/2011 c3 leath
Just goes to show you, don't mess with kids with superpowers. Nice touch with the DCAU League and Watchtower.
Just goes to show you, don't mess with kids with superpowers. Nice touch with the DCAU League and Watchtower.
4/28/2011 c19 JDP95
That is mean! You put a break after THAT cliffhanger? Mean. Lol. Loved the chapter. Brainy and the Trips encounter a new face while Saturn Girl and Phantom girl disappear with Tim- I mean, a creature :) The fight scene was awesome, as always. Keep up this amazing job!
That is mean! You put a break after THAT cliffhanger? Mean. Lol. Loved the chapter. Brainy and the Trips encounter a new face while Saturn Girl and Phantom girl disappear with Tim- I mean, a creature :) The fight scene was awesome, as always. Keep up this amazing job!
4/28/2011 c19 6The Violet Rose
Two cliffhangers in a row, nice. So it seems Timber Wolf has finally made his first appearance. I enjoyed this chapter, it was entertaining to read. I look forward to the next chapter.
6The Violet RoseTwo cliffhangers in a row, nice. So it seems Timber Wolf has finally made his first appearance. I enjoyed this chapter, it was entertaining to read. I look forward to the next chapter.
4/27/2011 c18 3JDP95
If this is an intro to who I think it is, then I am excited! Can't wait to see how this all turns out. Amazing work, as always. Keep it up!
3JDP95If this is an intro to who I think it is, then I am excited! Can't wait to see how this all turns out. Amazing work, as always. Keep it up!
4/26/2011 c17 JDP95
A ship eating asteroid? Interesting. That's another thing you have. Very original ideas. I mean, the Legion's been rebootd three or four times, and you still have original ideas! I love what you're doing! Keep it up!
A ship eating asteroid? Interesting. That's another thing you have. Very original ideas. I mean, the Legion's been rebootd three or four times, and you still have original ideas! I love what you're doing! Keep it up!