for Areté 1: The Rebirth of Valor4/26/2011 c16 
3JDP95
So they're Legionnaires now. Pretty cool. I love the tattoo idea. It's creative, awesome, and efficient all at the same time! You guys really put a lot of work into this and you can tell when you are reading it. I hope this lasts for a looonnnggg time, 'cause I am really enjoying it!
3JDP95So they're Legionnaires now. Pretty cool. I love the tattoo idea. It's creative, awesome, and efficient all at the same time! You guys really put a lot of work into this and you can tell when you are reading it. I hope this lasts for a looonnnggg time, 'cause I am really enjoying it!
4/26/2011 c15 JDP95
I liked this chapter. It gave us more on the Knights and Lightning. He's a bit of a jerk, isn't he? Anyways, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while :S I've been a little busy. I'm back though :) Keep up the awesome work!
I liked this chapter. It gave us more on the Knights and Lightning. He's a bit of a jerk, isn't he? Anyways, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while :S I've been a little busy. I'm back though :) Keep up the awesome work!
4/24/2011 c2 leath
Ah, the classic Legion origin. A constant no matter which version of the Legion is being dealt with. This should be good.
Ah, the classic Legion origin. A constant no matter which version of the Legion is being dealt with. This should be good.
4/23/2011 c1 leath
Peonywinx pointed this out to me and I'm finally getting around to reading it. This seems like it's gonna be one interesting story.
Peonywinx pointed this out to me and I'm finally getting around to reading it. This seems like it's gonna be one interesting story.
4/23/2011 c14 JDP95
Crimson eyes? Who's watching them now? So much mystery! I love it :D! Keep up the awesome work SQS. And happy Easter!
Crimson eyes? Who's watching them now? So much mystery! I love it :D! Keep up the awesome work SQS. And happy Easter!
4/23/2011 c13 JDP95
Great fight scenes, as always. Is this Red X a version of the Robin Red X? I loved how all the fighters worked together, and how awesome the fight scenes were. Great chapter :)
Great fight scenes, as always. Is this Red X a version of the Robin Red X? I loved how all the fighters worked together, and how awesome the fight scenes were. Great chapter :)
4/21/2011 c12 JDP95
Another great chapter! Loved the little fight scene and these new characters are still shrouded in mystery. I did not see Adeola coming. I knew "Charlotte" was going to be a main character, but i didn't think it was going to turn out to be Adeola... Nice job SQS!
Another great chapter! Loved the little fight scene and these new characters are still shrouded in mystery. I did not see Adeola coming. I knew "Charlotte" was going to be a main character, but i didn't think it was going to turn out to be Adeola... Nice job SQS!
4/20/2011 c11 JDP95
Nice chapter! So there's a new team, I'm guessing the one from the trailer. The Legion isn't doing as well as I thought they were. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Nice chapter! So there's a new team, I'm guessing the one from the trailer. The Legion isn't doing as well as I thought they were. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
4/20/2011 c2 Avenger 22
Good first chapter. Don't really have much to say other than that. Can't wait to read more!
Good first chapter. Don't really have much to say other than that. Can't wait to read more!
4/19/2011 c10 3JDP95
I loved how the Legion was so coordinated. They were like a machine. When Brainy and Lightning lost the three assasins, the others got them. God teamwork. Loved the fight scenes as always, and the story line is very intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
3JDP95I loved how the Legion was so coordinated. They were like a machine. When Brainy and Lightning lost the three assasins, the others got them. God teamwork. Loved the fight scenes as always, and the story line is very intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/18/2011 c9 JDP95
Very mysterious. Who are the four new characters? And what trouble awaits the Legion? Can't wait to find out! I liked the humor in this chapter with Charlotte and Arner. Keep up the good work Star-Quill Society!
Very mysterious. Who are the four new characters? And what trouble awaits the Legion? Can't wait to find out! I liked the humor in this chapter with Charlotte and Arner. Keep up the good work Star-Quill Society!
4/17/2011 c8 JDP95
I liked how you gave this history. It speeds up the story from the beginning but it gives the reader all the information they need. About Invisible Kid, did Jacques die? Cause Invisible Kid II joins, but it never says, so I wasn't sure...
I liked how you gave this history. It speeds up the story from the beginning but it gives the reader all the information they need. About Invisible Kid, did Jacques die? Cause Invisible Kid II joins, but it never says, so I wasn't sure...
4/16/2011 c7 JDP95
Duddeeeee! The fight scenes... were so freaking EPIC! You need to write more of them! A LOT more! I'm glad the Legion got new members and a new HQ. Can't wait for the next episode!
Duddeeeee! The fight scenes... were so freaking EPIC! You need to write more of them! A LOT more! I'm glad the Legion got new members and a new HQ. Can't wait for the next episode!
4/15/2011 c6 JDP95
Yay try outs! Love how Garth always gets hurt or attacked or something :P Can't wait to see how the Legion will deal with the new threat!
Yay try outs! Love how Garth always gets hurt or attacked or something :P Can't wait to see how the Legion will deal with the new threat!