for The Year of the False Spring3/8 c10 scarxtardis
I wish I wasn't so late to catch onto this story, it's magnificent. I literally just spent the last 5 hours reading it. It's probably a bit much to ask for an update, but it's still amazing! Love it so much.
I wish I wasn't so late to catch onto this story, it's magnificent. I literally just spent the last 5 hours reading it. It's probably a bit much to ask for an update, but it's still amazing! Love it so much.
3/7 c10 Guest
I hope you'll update, even if it looks like the fic has been abandoned. Great read so far :)
I hope you'll update, even if it looks like the fic has been abandoned. Great read so far :)
2/27 c10 Insomnia0
This is beautiful, I must say.
Lyanna is so... Correctly portrayed here, and I love it that you didn't make her perfect, as she is in the majority of other stories.
It's a pity that the fic is abandoned, since its really great and well-written, I think.
Anyway, thank you for the work you've done, it was a pleasure to read it.
This is beautiful, I must say.
Lyanna is so... Correctly portrayed here, and I love it that you didn't make her perfect, as she is in the majority of other stories.
It's a pity that the fic is abandoned, since its really great and well-written, I think.
Anyway, thank you for the work you've done, it was a pleasure to read it.
1/24 c10 
6bellarose-riddle
Your story is the best pre-Robert's Rebelion story ever!
The way you write is amazing, you are a really good writer!
I cannot way for the next chapter! :)
6bellarose-riddleYour story is the best pre-Robert's Rebelion story ever!
The way you write is amazing, you are a really good writer!
I cannot way for the next chapter! :)
1/5 c10 AllMenMustDie
I really love your characterization! I tend to avoid Lyanna-centric fics because people make her out to be way too perfect, but I love what you've done, and I love how much like Arya she is. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because it's one of the best I've read!
I really love your characterization! I tend to avoid Lyanna-centric fics because people make her out to be way too perfect, but I love what you've done, and I love how much like Arya she is. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because it's one of the best I've read!
9/18/2012 c10 Aaron
Very good story. Would have liked to see more of the actual tourney with Howland Reed and Rhaegar crowning Lyanna as the stepping stones to Roberts Rebellion but it was still a very good read with a good insight into th estarks as children, and Robert and Neds relationship.
Very good!
Very good story. Would have liked to see more of the actual tourney with Howland Reed and Rhaegar crowning Lyanna as the stepping stones to Roberts Rebellion but it was still a very good read with a good insight into th estarks as children, and Robert and Neds relationship.
Very good!
8/21/2012 c10 3clairxdexlune
Love your take on Lyanna, particularly her rather capricious - even a bit mercurial - nature. Hopefully you update soon, it has been far too long!
3clairxdexluneLove your take on Lyanna, particularly her rather capricious - even a bit mercurial - nature. Hopefully you update soon, it has been far too long!
7/26/2012 c10 4Flashyfirebird
This story is amazing! I really hope that you continue it. I love your characterizations of everyone, and I think you are spot on with regard to the changing characters of the teenagers versus the basically set characters of adults like Rhaeger and Elia. Teens and children change all the time, go through phases, etc, whereas adults are certainly more constant. Although they can change (e.g. Jaime Lannister) it seems the exception, rather than the rule. I really like your portrayal of Lyanna - you've definitely brought her to life in this story. I'm very interested to see how the events of the tourney and Rhaegar's subsequent "kidnapping" will play out. I, too, had a hard time envisioning Rhaegar (as described in Martin's books) simply falling in love with Lyanna, but I could believe he would elope with her if he believed it was for the greater good (to fight the white walkers, etc). I also particularly love your take on Petyr's duel at Riverrun (he is a sneaky little bastard, isn't he?) and Lyanna's quick-thinking save. I hadn't even wondered about that until I read this, but you're right - it doesn't seem in-character for Petyr (even Petyr the boy) to challenge someone larger than himself to a duel without having some kind of plan up his sleeve. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your fabulous story - update soon!
4FlashyfirebirdThis story is amazing! I really hope that you continue it. I love your characterizations of everyone, and I think you are spot on with regard to the changing characters of the teenagers versus the basically set characters of adults like Rhaeger and Elia. Teens and children change all the time, go through phases, etc, whereas adults are certainly more constant. Although they can change (e.g. Jaime Lannister) it seems the exception, rather than the rule. I really like your portrayal of Lyanna - you've definitely brought her to life in this story. I'm very interested to see how the events of the tourney and Rhaegar's subsequent "kidnapping" will play out. I, too, had a hard time envisioning Rhaegar (as described in Martin's books) simply falling in love with Lyanna, but I could believe he would elope with her if he believed it was for the greater good (to fight the white walkers, etc). I also particularly love your take on Petyr's duel at Riverrun (he is a sneaky little bastard, isn't he?) and Lyanna's quick-thinking save. I hadn't even wondered about that until I read this, but you're right - it doesn't seem in-character for Petyr (even Petyr the boy) to challenge someone larger than himself to a duel without having some kind of plan up his sleeve. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your fabulous story - update soon!
7/26/2012 c10 Bess Woodville
I beg you please update :)
I beg you please update :)