for The Aftermath1/17/2012 c6 
3Spica75
Nice. Except for that broken arm. ;)
Thank you for your wishes and the same to you, keep up the good work.
3Spica75Nice. Except for that broken arm. ;)
Thank you for your wishes and the same to you, keep up the good work.
1/16/2012 c6 1Ash Aijou
Thank you so much for the update! It was a nice chapter, although you did your best, so don't worry it.
1Ash AijouThank you so much for the update! It was a nice chapter, although you did your best, so don't worry it.
10/29/2011 c5 biggie1447
Great update to the story.
I really like how you are taking some of the angst and depression out of the elfen lied story. There aren't enough fics that do this. I can honestly say that you have created two of the best fics about Elfen Lied on here.
As for not being able to update much this coming season, don't worry about it too much, it is going to get very busy for everyone soon.
I will personally be awaiting the next installment whenever you get around to posting it. Keep up the good work!
Great update to the story.
I really like how you are taking some of the angst and depression out of the elfen lied story. There aren't enough fics that do this. I can honestly say that you have created two of the best fics about Elfen Lied on here.
As for not being able to update much this coming season, don't worry about it too much, it is going to get very busy for everyone soon.
I will personally be awaiting the next installment whenever you get around to posting it. Keep up the good work!
10/29/2011 c5 Ash Aijou
I'm going to be coming out of the darkness just to write this short, probably meaningless review. First of all, I'm really glad you updated! This chapter was really interesting, even though I was tempted to laugh at every other part (mostly thanks to Alex and his witty remarks, but oh well). I'm not sure where the quote is from or what movie it's from, but that was pretty funny with that scene and all. Anyway, good luck with your work! :D I'll be waiting here, whenever the next chapter comes out.
I'm going to be coming out of the darkness just to write this short, probably meaningless review. First of all, I'm really glad you updated! This chapter was really interesting, even though I was tempted to laugh at every other part (mostly thanks to Alex and his witty remarks, but oh well). I'm not sure where the quote is from or what movie it's from, but that was pretty funny with that scene and all. Anyway, good luck with your work! :D I'll be waiting here, whenever the next chapter comes out.
10/14/2011 c4 biggie1447
Excellent story.
However i do believe you meant PECKING order instead of packing after Amy's little fight.
I do hope you continue to update this wonderful series.
Excellent story.
However i do believe you meant PECKING order instead of packing after Amy's little fight.
I do hope you continue to update this wonderful series.
8/13/2011 c4 Ashen Assassin
Nice chapter. It makes me happy to see that Amy is in the spotlight for the time being. I hope she keeps getting good...screen time(?).
Nice chapter. It makes me happy to see that Amy is in the spotlight for the time being. I hope she keeps getting good...screen time(?).
8/11/2011 c3 Ashen Assassin
Short chapter, but it still has me interested in the story. I hope the next one comes out soon.
Short chapter, but it still has me interested in the story. I hope the next one comes out soon.
6/18/2011 c3 1Ash Aijou
Yay, congrats on passing your exams. That's great. =D
This was a terrific chapter. It had its funny moments, the serious ones, and I can't wait for the next one.
The plot with Amy's group seems really interesting to me, though. I can't wait to read how the facilities will be like, and who exactly this daughter will be.
Till the next chapter!
1Ash AijouYay, congrats on passing your exams. That's great. =D
This was a terrific chapter. It had its funny moments, the serious ones, and I can't wait for the next one.
The plot with Amy's group seems really interesting to me, though. I can't wait to read how the facilities will be like, and who exactly this daughter will be.
Till the next chapter!
6/18/2011 c3 10Rocci
Tis about time, I had feared you had died or something. An excellent chapter if I do say so myself (Though a tiny work on grammatical errors is needed) Hopefully I can expect a new chapter up very soon.
10RocciTis about time, I had feared you had died or something. An excellent chapter if I do say so myself (Though a tiny work on grammatical errors is needed) Hopefully I can expect a new chapter up very soon.
4/18/2011 c2 Rocci
Another excellent chapter if I do say so myself. Sucks about the OS but hey, got the chapter done so that's what counts. Not much else ot say but to keep it up and I hope to see the next chapter ASAP.
Another excellent chapter if I do say so myself. Sucks about the OS but hey, got the chapter done so that's what counts. Not much else ot say but to keep it up and I hope to see the next chapter ASAP.
4/11/2011 c1 Dark09
Good start on your sequel mate :-)! Your argument is agreeable in this case about racism, so i look forward to how the story progresses. I also wonder how this new Dicloni will fit into the story, and what her motives are. Lots of questions and looking forward to them to get answered in the future chapters :-)!
Keep up the great work!
Good start on your sequel mate :-)! Your argument is agreeable in this case about racism, so i look forward to how the story progresses. I also wonder how this new Dicloni will fit into the story, and what her motives are. Lots of questions and looking forward to them to get answered in the future chapters :-)!
Keep up the great work!
4/9/2011 c1 Rocci
What can I say, a great beginning of what I can only believe to be a great sequel. I diligently await the second chapter.
What can I say, a great beginning of what I can only believe to be a great sequel. I diligently await the second chapter.
4/9/2011 c1 JonnaJacobsen
Cool story, and you can really rant... Oo
But you know what? I agree with you... All these fanfictions about Diclonius and Humans living in peace ARE **! Looking at the "Story of Humanity", we are complete @$$holes! Even after thousands of years, there is still racism, and not only that: White people often do horrible things to other white people, and Asians and black people (no racism intended) do pretty much the same thing! Oo
So yeah, I agree that it is so weird that in most fanfictions, in 20 years there is complete peace between Diclonius and Humans, when there isn't even peace between other Humans "races"! Oo
Cool story, and you can really rant... Oo
But you know what? I agree with you... All these fanfictions about Diclonius and Humans living in peace ARE **! Looking at the "Story of Humanity", we are complete @$$holes! Even after thousands of years, there is still racism, and not only that: White people often do horrible things to other white people, and Asians and black people (no racism intended) do pretty much the same thing! Oo
So yeah, I agree that it is so weird that in most fanfictions, in 20 years there is complete peace between Diclonius and Humans, when there isn't even peace between other Humans "races"! Oo