for HaloSWEndwar7/8/2012 c11 
2RagnarBlackmane
He had his hands around dooku's throat and wrist.
Dooku should be dead, force or not. I rearlise you need to balance the two but once a spartan has his hands on a human, it's all over. One flick of his thumb or the slight tightening of his hands and boom.
I find it hard to believe a soldier trained from such a young age woud hesitate or gloat at such a moment. He would just kill him straight away.
2RagnarBlackmaneHe had his hands around dooku's throat and wrist.
Dooku should be dead, force or not. I rearlise you need to balance the two but once a spartan has his hands on a human, it's all over. One flick of his thumb or the slight tightening of his hands and boom.
I find it hard to believe a soldier trained from such a young age woud hesitate or gloat at such a moment. He would just kill him straight away.
7/18/2011 c9 1im2lazy4aname
Cortana was a fifth generation smart ai that is two generations better so sigfried and manuel should be sixth generation.
1im2lazy4anameCortana was a fifth generation smart ai that is two generations better so sigfried and manuel should be sixth generation.
7/18/2011 c7 im2lazy4aname
I really hate those egocentric jerks who kill enemies by hitting them in the back while they fight and say "I am the best!" if they are the best why can't they win a straight up fight?
I really hate those egocentric jerks who kill enemies by hitting them in the back while they fight and say "I am the best!" if they are the best why can't they win a straight up fight?
6/13/2011 c11 warrior117
this awsome so far. come pared to most of the crap mad on this subject. please update soon . also if i might ask are the jiralhanae /aka the brutes/ good guy in this story? or at least some cause they are the most loyal to the covenent riligon? and if they are l have some ideas.
this awsome so far. come pared to most of the crap mad on this subject. please update soon . also if i might ask are the jiralhanae /aka the brutes/ good guy in this story? or at least some cause they are the most loyal to the covenent riligon? and if they are l have some ideas.
5/26/2011 c8 Atrile
Where the hell is my Arbiter scene! Oh well, it doesn't really matter, I suppose.
I'm surprised at how well the ordinary white beskar'gam clones fared against the Flood. Although I enjoyed the action sequence, it would not have been surprising had the whole of the Starstreak crew and troops been taken over by the Flood, with the Spartans arriving too late to really save anyone, only exterminate the threat. The whole situation felt a little too easy, and as a result the undercurrent of heightened tension wasn't really there this chapter. Or maybe I was just feeling apathetic.
Anyhow, best of luck on your finals. Taking them is always hell.
Where the hell is my Arbiter scene! Oh well, it doesn't really matter, I suppose.
I'm surprised at how well the ordinary white beskar'gam clones fared against the Flood. Although I enjoyed the action sequence, it would not have been surprising had the whole of the Starstreak crew and troops been taken over by the Flood, with the Spartans arriving too late to really save anyone, only exterminate the threat. The whole situation felt a little too easy, and as a result the undercurrent of heightened tension wasn't really there this chapter. Or maybe I was just feeling apathetic.
Anyhow, best of luck on your finals. Taking them is always hell.
5/22/2011 c7 8I have a jar of dirt
Really nice story, but what happened to chapter three? There seems to be a gap there...
8I have a jar of dirtReally nice story, but what happened to chapter three? There seems to be a gap there...
5/15/2011 c7 Atrile
It's a pity you pitted the 'good' guys against the 'bad' guys, but who am I to criticize your plot choices anyway? The Arbiter combat scene was a nice addition to this chapter.
May the force serve you well on your finals then - I'm taking mine as well now.
It's a pity you pitted the 'good' guys against the 'bad' guys, but who am I to criticize your plot choices anyway? The Arbiter combat scene was a nice addition to this chapter.
May the force serve you well on your finals then - I'm taking mine as well now.