for iDestruction in an Amusement Park6/12/2011 c4 BreakDownReality
I KNEEEWWWW IT! (lol)
omg this is so good!
you need to update this!
and i want to thank you for reviewing my story (which btdubs i updated)
it's such an honor to have a great writer like you tell me my story's good
UPDATE!
I CANT WAITT!
I KNEEEWWWW IT! (lol)
omg this is so good!
you need to update this!
and i want to thank you for reviewing my story (which btdubs i updated)
it's such an honor to have a great writer like you tell me my story's good
UPDATE!
I CANT WAITT!
6/11/2011 c4
22kikudog6
I like your story so far, PLEASE update soon I really wanna know what happens next :)
22kikudog6I like your story so far, PLEASE update soon I really wanna know what happens next :)
6/11/2011 c2 The Sarcastic Polar Bear
I didn't notice that you had more chapters. SAM! don't say you'd rather crash and lose your eyesight in a drama story!
I didn't notice that you had more chapters. SAM! don't say you'd rather crash and lose your eyesight in a drama story!
6/11/2011 c1 The Sarcastic Polar Bear
Intereting. I rarely read iCarly, because I quit watching. However, iOMG has made me read some stories. So... update? Or I'll use Sam's butter sock on you?
Intereting. I rarely read iCarly, because I quit watching. However, iOMG has made me read some stories. So... update? Or I'll use Sam's butter sock on you?
5/29/2011 c3
14I Slay Darkness With Belief
Hey! This is actually really good. The right length, and I have fun reading it. I like how it's all in present tense. Its easier to go in past, so people never take the time to do that anymore. I'm guilty of that. But this is good. There are a few misspellings or word mix-ups, but its overall really nice. Sam and Carly are a little out of character, though. Carly isn't quite as manipulative and Flirty. I mean, she IS Flirty, but she won't flirt and admit that she likes to flirt with guys at random. And Sam, I guess, is a little extreme. Bit I like it. Definitely keep going! :-)
~Bubbles
14I Slay Darkness With BeliefHey! This is actually really good. The right length, and I have fun reading it. I like how it's all in present tense. Its easier to go in past, so people never take the time to do that anymore. I'm guilty of that. But this is good. There are a few misspellings or word mix-ups, but its overall really nice. Sam and Carly are a little out of character, though. Carly isn't quite as manipulative and Flirty. I mean, she IS Flirty, but she won't flirt and admit that she likes to flirt with guys at random. And Sam, I guess, is a little extreme. Bit I like it. Definitely keep going! :-)
~Bubbles
4/18/2011 c2 chicken
this is really good, keep going...
shawn is creepy but he seems nice...
i guess we'll see
this is really good, keep going...
shawn is creepy but he seems nice...
i guess we'll see
4/16/2011 c2 Annika
I like it! Write more!
I like it! Write more!
4/12/2011 c1 reviewer
hmmm nice story so far :D like the idea...UPDATE!
hmmm nice story so far :D like the idea...UPDATE!
