for Dungeons, Dragons, and a Little Friendship10/20/2012 c1 pacificuser
Man! You are the most creative genius I've gotten the pleasure of knowing in a very long time! To think,I thought that creativity was already dead on fan fiction!
But then,you come along,and with one ultra-cool story set things right! in my whole life,I'd never thought myself capable of reading a My little Pony story! I'm the kind of guy who listens to Iron Maiden,never wares pink,has a mustache,and takes martial arts classes! For you to change my mind and open it up to a whole new realm of possibilities... Its just amazing... continue to update this story please... As in cool,its a cross-over with one of my favorite genres!
You should open a facebook like page for this story! Where fans can give constructive suggestions and discuss matters which are too long to talk about in the comments section! Go! :-)
Man! You are the most creative genius I've gotten the pleasure of knowing in a very long time! To think,I thought that creativity was already dead on fan fiction!
But then,you come along,and with one ultra-cool story set things right! in my whole life,I'd never thought myself capable of reading a My little Pony story! I'm the kind of guy who listens to Iron Maiden,never wares pink,has a mustache,and takes martial arts classes! For you to change my mind and open it up to a whole new realm of possibilities... Its just amazing... continue to update this story please... As in cool,its a cross-over with one of my favorite genres!
You should open a facebook like page for this story! Where fans can give constructive suggestions and discuss matters which are too long to talk about in the comments section! Go! :-)
9/11/2012 c6 Guest
I love the group's name! It even gave me shivers!
I love the group's name! It even gave me shivers!
9/8/2012 c1 Guest
OH MY GOSH! My two favorite things in one place! And marvelously written too! Yes! Thank you so much for writing this.
OH MY GOSH! My two favorite things in one place! And marvelously written too! Yes! Thank you so much for writing this.
12/18/2011 c14 Qazarar
Amazing story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, and what happens with the other six. Keep up the good work!
Amazing story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, and what happens with the other six. Keep up the good work!
12/9/2011 c9 
3Descriptivist
With the whole bet about doors going on, it seemed to me that a pretty big deal was made of the Carousel Boutique's fire exit window. It seems like either a superfluous, meaningless detail that should have been inserted less clumsily, or a glaringly obvious Chekhov's Gun.
3DescriptivistWith the whole bet about doors going on, it seemed to me that a pretty big deal was made of the Carousel Boutique's fire exit window. It seems like either a superfluous, meaningless detail that should have been inserted less clumsily, or a glaringly obvious Chekhov's Gun.
12/9/2011 c5 Descriptivist
So, in this fabricated universe where Cartanis has always been a pony, how did his horn break?
So, in this fabricated universe where Cartanis has always been a pony, how did his horn break?
12/9/2011 c3 Descriptivist
"The plow harness would of abrasively chaffed his flanks if he hadn't of kept them on."
That should be "would have abrasively chaffed his flanks if he hadn't kept them on." 'Would've' is a contraction of 'would have'.
"The plow harness would of abrasively chaffed his flanks if he hadn't of kept them on."
That should be "would have abrasively chaffed his flanks if he hadn't kept them on." 'Would've' is a contraction of 'would have'.
12/6/2011 c12 progos too lazy to log in
Pinkie the rocker bard reminds me SO MUCH of Doug Sangnoir, which means nothing to you, unless you read "Drunkard's Walk". Nevertheless! I wonder what she would make of "Lightning's Hand" ("Hoof"?) by Kansas. My guess is either super speed, flight, and lightning creation and control for herself, or a simulacrum of Rainbow Dash at her most warlike with those traits exaggerated.
Pinkie the rocker bard reminds me SO MUCH of Doug Sangnoir, which means nothing to you, unless you read "Drunkard's Walk". Nevertheless! I wonder what she would make of "Lightning's Hand" ("Hoof"?) by Kansas. My guess is either super speed, flight, and lightning creation and control for herself, or a simulacrum of Rainbow Dash at her most warlike with those traits exaggerated.
12/1/2011 c14 Gomegadon
Hello there! well anyways christ this thing is long, and I loved every moment of it, I had to force myself away a few times to go in search of food.
oh and I love that perspective thing you do, the same span of time from multiple angles and POV.
I wish I'd found this sooner.
Wish I could offer critique but I'm no good at that, i'm Runonsentence Man you see and my power is to babble endlessly with nary a care for formatting and puctuation, aside from a possible overuse of commas.
Though I guess I did notice some typos here and there, no... not typos, like the wrong word here and there... oh I know Void Caller, I saw it as Voice Caller somewhere, no idea what chapter, it was in Andur's backstory, I really don't know why that one stood out and made itself be memorized by me, bah I'm rambling, I patiently await the next part of your story, bye now!
Hello there! well anyways christ this thing is long, and I loved every moment of it, I had to force myself away a few times to go in search of food.
oh and I love that perspective thing you do, the same span of time from multiple angles and POV.
I wish I'd found this sooner.
Wish I could offer critique but I'm no good at that, i'm Runonsentence Man you see and my power is to babble endlessly with nary a care for formatting and puctuation, aside from a possible overuse of commas.
Though I guess I did notice some typos here and there, no... not typos, like the wrong word here and there... oh I know Void Caller, I saw it as Voice Caller somewhere, no idea what chapter, it was in Andur's backstory, I really don't know why that one stood out and made itself be memorized by me, bah I'm rambling, I patiently await the next part of your story, bye now!
11/18/2011 c1 Descriptivist
Confound these ponies, driving me to learn to make friends and join a group of D&D players.
Confound these ponies, driving me to learn to make friends and join a group of D&D players.
10/23/2011 c12 1Dymian
This is really good. But you know what I would like to see? Goku getting thrown into the pony world? Wouldn't it be the most hilarious thing to see a super sayin pony? Especially if he goes ss3.
1DymianThis is really good. But you know what I would like to see? Goku getting thrown into the pony world? Wouldn't it be the most hilarious thing to see a super sayin pony? Especially if he goes ss3.
10/21/2011 c13 14Shadic the Hedgehog Author
I like this. A nine pony party, two-thirds of which are likely still heroic tier, stopping a undead knight templar? Sounds like a mix of LotR and FFX when it's put that way, doesn't it?
Anyways, I was actually wondering about a set of not-quite character sheets for the party. Manely something along the lines of name-class-level-special equipment, or whatever. Either way, this makes me want to run my Savage Worlds game utilizing the Elements of Harmony even more.
Hope to see more soon!
14Shadic the Hedgehog AuthorI like this. A nine pony party, two-thirds of which are likely still heroic tier, stopping a undead knight templar? Sounds like a mix of LotR and FFX when it's put that way, doesn't it?
Anyways, I was actually wondering about a set of not-quite character sheets for the party. Manely something along the lines of name-class-level-special equipment, or whatever. Either way, this makes me want to run my Savage Worlds game utilizing the Elements of Harmony even more.
Hope to see more soon!
8/8/2011 c11 5Ringcaat
REVIEWER'S NOTE:
The magic of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic has consumed my life in recent months and at last it's time for me to give back. I've just started writing fan fiction of my own, but first, I've resolved to write reviews! I started off with a top ten list (which may not include stories begun after June 30th, 2011), and now I'm adding a bunch of Honorable Mentions. :-)
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This is probably the longest pony story I've encountered, and it certainly has epic scope. I'm not sure how I feel about it. You've made me sort of resent the dungeonification of Equestria, and the utter heroism of your Dungeon Masters...but then, they are well wrought characters and you certainly have come up with a lot of logically connected dangerous situations for them to get through. When you started invoking the Elements of Harmony to permanently change your characters along with the Mane Six, it actually hurt a bit because I was so torn. Part of me, for example, wanted Applejack to swear at Ted and never forgive him for tearing her hat. But that wouldn't be a reasonable reaction for her-that's just me wanting everyone to get a break, and not to -have- to transform into a super warrior in order to get by. So, congratulations. You've made an amazing work that's not only well-crafted as an adventure story but also evokes stripes of emotional impact I rarely encounter. I'm not sure if I'll keep reading, since it's -so- long, but I'm glad I read as far as I did.
5RingcaatREVIEWER'S NOTE:
The magic of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic has consumed my life in recent months and at last it's time for me to give back. I've just started writing fan fiction of my own, but first, I've resolved to write reviews! I started off with a top ten list (which may not include stories begun after June 30th, 2011), and now I'm adding a bunch of Honorable Mentions. :-)
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This is probably the longest pony story I've encountered, and it certainly has epic scope. I'm not sure how I feel about it. You've made me sort of resent the dungeonification of Equestria, and the utter heroism of your Dungeon Masters...but then, they are well wrought characters and you certainly have come up with a lot of logically connected dangerous situations for them to get through. When you started invoking the Elements of Harmony to permanently change your characters along with the Mane Six, it actually hurt a bit because I was so torn. Part of me, for example, wanted Applejack to swear at Ted and never forgive him for tearing her hat. But that wouldn't be a reasonable reaction for her-that's just me wanting everyone to get a break, and not to -have- to transform into a super warrior in order to get by. So, congratulations. You've made an amazing work that's not only well-crafted as an adventure story but also evokes stripes of emotional impact I rarely encounter. I'm not sure if I'll keep reading, since it's -so- long, but I'm glad I read as far as I did.