3/4 c1 6dark nightmere
I think you should continue this story or write a squal so that we can see what happens. I think that Richter should become more evil now that he is a vampire and hunt down those who he rescued when he was human. I think that Richter and Annette should find Maria fighting her way through dracula's minuns in stage 3 or 4 maybe 5. I think that when she sees her sister and Richter she should be teriffed knowing that she cannot kill her sister and that the belmort's most servive to slay dracula. I think that they should drain Maria dry and Annette should take her power for her own but turn it dark. I think that they should find sister tara in stage 2 as she looks at Richter or her lord god who she belives him to be become a demon she should be terrffied knowing that death has come for her. I think that as the two drain Tara dracula should watch this and smile as his power incress from the two death with Meria gone he claims her soul and with it her power and Tara holy soul gives him new dark power. I think that Iris should be making her way into stage 1 when she will be confronted by annette who will smile as she looks at doctor ready to drain her and attack transalfaina with Ricther. I think that dracula should serive for 4 more years before his son Alacard should come in and vanquish the dark lord but fail to slay Richter and Annette who should escape and plan to resserect the dark lord.

4/28/2011 c1 20James Birdsong
Truely fantastic

4/14/2011 c1 6danceofgold
It's sad that Richter wants to kill himself after seeing Annette turned into a vampire. You should write more!