for Free At Last1/19 c1 joanne
THE TEMPLARS WILL PAY FOR WHAT THEY HAVE DONE!
THE TEMPLARS WILL PAY FOR WHAT THEY HAVE DONE!
6/28/2012 c1 Guest
so sad "sob"
so sad "sob"
5/2/2012 c1 
1AquaKBenten
Beautifully written even though it was very sad, though that was the point wasn't it ^_^
1AquaKBentenBeautifully written even though it was very sad, though that was the point wasn't it ^_^
4/13/2012 c1 1Rinku-Chan 333
It's good, although the Tranquil retain their memories, they just don't do anything about it. Just thought that I would point it out. Other than that, though, I'll never be able to support the Templars again (although it was already rare :P) T.T
1Rinku-Chan 333It's good, although the Tranquil retain their memories, they just don't do anything about it. Just thought that I would point it out. Other than that, though, I'll never be able to support the Templars again (although it was already rare :P) T.T
3/27/2012 c1 7Womble27
Oh my days, what are the people on this site trying to do to me! D:
I'm crying, I'm actually welling up. See? Tears :(
Gorgeously written though, I could totally see this happening even though it's so sad :(
7Womble27Oh my days, what are the people on this site trying to do to me! D:
I'm crying, I'm actually welling up. See? Tears :(
Gorgeously written though, I could totally see this happening even though it's so sad :(
11/7/2011 c1 Lady Mariha
The best Dragon Age story! At least Fenris will learn something important now. Keeep it up.
The best Dragon Age story! At least Fenris will learn something important now. Keeep it up.
9/25/2011 c1 27Hatsepsut
I am taking my time reading your stories and I just came across this! I want to hit you!
I want to hug you and kiss you!
I want to just kneel on thr ground and cry!
You monster, that was brilliant!
Seriously now, beautifully done, so much emotion in such a small fic...If you hurt Fen-Fen like this again though, I'll come over there and hurt you
27HatsepsutI am taking my time reading your stories and I just came across this! I want to hit you!
I want to hug you and kiss you!
I want to just kneel on thr ground and cry!
You monster, that was brilliant!
Seriously now, beautifully done, so much emotion in such a small fic...If you hurt Fen-Fen like this again though, I'll come over there and hurt you
9/19/2011 c1 NoMadKa
So sad((( but do you think fenris would really kill her so quickly? wouldn/t he i don't know look for some cure or something else?
still i liked the story ( cause it seemed to me while my gameplay that Meredith would really make my aggressive hawke tranquil^^).
So sad((( but do you think fenris would really kill her so quickly? wouldn/t he i don't know look for some cure or something else?
still i liked the story ( cause it seemed to me while my gameplay that Meredith would really make my aggressive hawke tranquil^^).
9/15/2011 c1 9Enchanter T.I.M
Well about time I read this and I gotta say. *Citizen kain clapping* My god now thats a tragedy! So many lovely what if scenarios ubbling up...oh dont get me wrong Im a fan of this couple and even I felt my heart wrench as Fenris mashed her heart like a sack of wet letters...but damned if I dont agree with you in the ending notes. Ugh indeed...
9Enchanter T.I.MWell about time I read this and I gotta say. *Citizen kain clapping* My god now thats a tragedy! So many lovely what if scenarios ubbling up...oh dont get me wrong Im a fan of this couple and even I felt my heart wrench as Fenris mashed her heart like a sack of wet letters...but damned if I dont agree with you in the ending notes. Ugh indeed...
9/1/2011 c1 stoobzzwife
Those bastards!
A tranquil Hawke? Gah! That was so sad, dont get me wrong... it was a good story!
Poor Fenris. :( Im glad he didnt leave her like that. And i hope he really did kill them all! lol
Those bastards!
A tranquil Hawke? Gah! That was so sad, dont get me wrong... it was a good story!
Poor Fenris. :( Im glad he didnt leave her like that. And i hope he really did kill them all! lol
4/14/2011 c1 FrellingBlighter
Oh dear Maker I'm welling up. That was horrible. Not the story, that was good, but the sad part was :(
It was extremely well-written but even I was tempted to press the back button on the page because it was too hard to see Fenris upset. Write a happy story soon, I beg of you.
Oh dear Maker I'm welling up. That was horrible. Not the story, that was good, but the sad part was :(
It was extremely well-written but even I was tempted to press the back button on the page because it was too hard to see Fenris upset. Write a happy story soon, I beg of you.
4/14/2011 c1 6dragonlover131313
OH god, Fenris' voice rang in my head when I read that last part. Very sad, so sad in fact you need to write a happy story to counterbalance the sadness scale. Very moving, so glad this couldnt happen in the game.
6dragonlover131313OH god, Fenris' voice rang in my head when I read that last part. Very sad, so sad in fact you need to write a happy story to counterbalance the sadness scale. Very moving, so glad this couldnt happen in the game.