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11RainbowExplosions
Asdfghjkl i LOVED that last exchange between the Trickster and the Innocent. And the line about the Innocent always wanting a dog made me smile.
11RainbowExplosionsAsdfghjkl i LOVED that last exchange between the Trickster and the Innocent. And the line about the Innocent always wanting a dog made me smile.
5/15/2012 c11 LaNymphe
Wow! Such a cute story! Absolutely loved it and the manner in which it is written!
Wow! Such a cute story! Absolutely loved it and the manner in which it is written!
8/28/2011 c11 21Zikka-chan
ILOVE how you ended it with the "Answer a question with a question" trope...Yep, I think Trickster and Innocent get along just fine
21Zikka-chanILOVE how you ended it with the "Answer a question with a question" trope...Yep, I think Trickster and Innocent get along just fine
8/27/2011 c11 4IHeart2896
Wow I'm happy for innocent staying at Kooza this time but that question sounded so... deep. I don't know why though it confused me as much as it did innocent if that's what it was supposed to be. When innocent replied back and trickster laughed I was like "LOL... What's the joke?" Great story! I tip my invisable hat to you
4IHeart2896Wow I'm happy for innocent staying at Kooza this time but that question sounded so... deep. I don't know why though it confused me as much as it did innocent if that's what it was supposed to be. When innocent replied back and trickster laughed I was like "LOL... What's the joke?" Great story! I tip my invisable hat to you
8/27/2011 c10 21Zikka-chan
SWEEET! I LOVED that ending! EPILOGUE! EP-I-LOGUE!
This would make a GREAT mission in Kooza: The Video game!
With your permission of course ;)
21Zikka-chanSWEEET! I LOVED that ending! EPILOGUE! EP-I-LOGUE!
This would make a GREAT mission in Kooza: The Video game!
With your permission of course ;)
8/27/2011 c9 21Zikka-chan
I LOVED this chapter! It was like a suspense scene from a movie! Especially the Jumping-out-the-window-cliffhanger ;)
21Zikka-chanI LOVED this chapter! It was like a suspense scene from a movie! Especially the Jumping-out-the-window-cliffhanger ;)
8/14/2011 c8 4IHeart2896
I knew it. I freaking knew it. I KNEW IT! That ** was suspicious I swear I had the feeling she was up with this! And yippee! You updated! Been a while since I read about Trickster :3
Keep at it! You're doing awesome!
4IHeart2896I knew it. I freaking knew it. I KNEW IT! That ** was suspicious I swear I had the feeling she was up with this! And yippee! You updated! Been a while since I read about Trickster :3
Keep at it! You're doing awesome!
8/14/2011 c8 21Zikka-chan
I don't know what it is about me...but I LOVE intense informational scnes where the characters converse what's happened so far and what they've come to the relevation of in a fiunny/awesome mannor...this is no short EPIC AWESOME...
21Zikka-chanI don't know what it is about me...but I LOVE intense informational scnes where the characters converse what's happened so far and what they've come to the relevation of in a fiunny/awesome mannor...this is no short EPIC AWESOME...
7/11/2011 c7 4IHeart2896
Hurray! Another amazing chapter! Anyways the king is actually right that lady is just screaming "Stranger danger"
4IHeart2896Hurray! Another amazing chapter! Anyways the king is actually right that lady is just screaming "Stranger danger"
7/5/2011 c1 IHeart2896
Wow in this chapter trickster seems in a really vunerable place. I feel sorry for him. Anyway I loved this and the other chapters
Wow in this chapter trickster seems in a really vunerable place. I feel sorry for him. Anyway I loved this and the other chapters
6/17/2011 c4 5Lunamione7
Howdy, Lee fan here!
Just giving you a formal notification of my existence :)
Loving your story by the way, love the Innocent miming and the characterization of the clowns and Trickster is fully awesome.
Was going to use Michael as the Pickpocket in my upcoming (still a long way off, I have been writing it every day for a year now and I'm still not happy...) story but I've decided to re-write the whole thing and throw Lee in there as well since Christian and Michael get to star in *everything* whilst Lee is generally forgotten for some reason :P
Good luck with your story, I shall be following its progress with interest!
Yours sincerely,
Lee Thompson's biggest fan.
5Lunamione7Howdy, Lee fan here!
Just giving you a formal notification of my existence :)
Loving your story by the way, love the Innocent miming and the characterization of the clowns and Trickster is fully awesome.
Was going to use Michael as the Pickpocket in my upcoming (still a long way off, I have been writing it every day for a year now and I'm still not happy...) story but I've decided to re-write the whole thing and throw Lee in there as well since Christian and Michael get to star in *everything* whilst Lee is generally forgotten for some reason :P
Good luck with your story, I shall be following its progress with interest!
Yours sincerely,
Lee Thompson's biggest fan.
4/17/2011 c2 Zikka-chan
I LOVE how to-the-show you kept it! And the bird creatures..? I can actually imagine that IN THE SHOW! (even though it isn't) VERY original! Well done!
I LOVE how to-the-show you kept it! And the bird creatures..? I can actually imagine that IN THE SHOW! (even though it isn't) VERY original! Well done!