for HeMan and the Summoning Jewels5/2/2011 c1 
162SharanMcQuack
OK, am I the only one who hardly noticed Orko back in the day and is highly annoyed by him now? Let him go home to Trolla, marry Dryl honeymoon on Orc with Mork and never be heard from again!
162SharanMcQuackOK, am I the only one who hardly noticed Orko back in the day and is highly annoyed by him now? Let him go home to Trolla, marry Dryl honeymoon on Orc with Mork and never be heard from again!
4/17/2011 c2 14HazzaTL3
Very well written, the way its set out, very much like an actual episode.
Just a small error I noticed in a chapter.
"And I better summon someone would be a much bigger help in a situation like this." Adam stated. Both Man at Arms and Duncan nodded.
Should it read
"And I better summon someone who would be a much bigger help in a situation like this." Adam stated. Both Man at Arms and Orko nodded.
14HazzaTL3Very well written, the way its set out, very much like an actual episode.
Just a small error I noticed in a chapter.
"And I better summon someone would be a much bigger help in a situation like this." Adam stated. Both Man at Arms and Duncan nodded.
Should it read
"And I better summon someone who would be a much bigger help in a situation like this." Adam stated. Both Man at Arms and Orko nodded.