for Blank Page8/23/2012 c40 allthelittlestars
I think it was a rather abrupt ending to things. They were only just starting to date again. But, I can respect your decision to mark this complete. If you feel inclined to do so, a future-take would be great. It can really tie up the story nicely.
I think it was a rather abrupt ending to things. They were only just starting to date again. But, I can respect your decision to mark this complete. If you feel inclined to do so, a future-take would be great. It can really tie up the story nicely.
8/12/2012 c40
2HopeStreet
I am hopeful for both Edward and Bella, but even if this relationship comes to an end, I think they'll end it on better terms than the first time and be able to move on without any bad feelings between them. They are both emotionally stronger and more mature and better able to handle the bumps along the way.
I didn't want this story to end. Thank you for writing this!
2HopeStreetI am hopeful for both Edward and Bella, but even if this relationship comes to an end, I think they'll end it on better terms than the first time and be able to move on without any bad feelings between them. They are both emotionally stronger and more mature and better able to handle the bumps along the way.
I didn't want this story to end. Thank you for writing this!
8/11/2012 c40 JustSu
Thank you for giving me such a different kind of fic. Different in a very good way, don't get me wrong. I usually don't like very much HS fics, but this one really got me. And the second part, the college part, i enjoyed immensely because I felt it real and down to earth. Real situations and real feelings. I can relate easily on Bella's confusion and fear.
Thanks again.
Have fun and keep writing!
Thank you for giving me such a different kind of fic. Different in a very good way, don't get me wrong. I usually don't like very much HS fics, but this one really got me. And the second part, the college part, i enjoyed immensely because I felt it real and down to earth. Real situations and real feelings. I can relate easily on Bella's confusion and fear.
Thanks again.
Have fun and keep writing!
8/10/2012 c40 DawnsWhimsy
I like the ending but will you be coming back soon with a little future-take perhaps? I would love that :) Thank You for writing and sharing this story with us.
I like the ending but will you be coming back soon with a little future-take perhaps? I would love that :) Thank You for writing and sharing this story with us.
7/3/2012 c39 kfoll
Sorry, but like Bella said, people do not change and do a 180 overnight. If he had the morals of an alley cat at 18 (not a kid) then he still has the capacity to be that way now. Once a cheater gets away with it once, whats to stop him doing it again. There would be no trust in this relationship so why bother?
Oh yes, because it's Edward and Bella!
Sorry, but like Bella said, people do not change and do a 180 overnight. If he had the morals of an alley cat at 18 (not a kid) then he still has the capacity to be that way now. Once a cheater gets away with it once, whats to stop him doing it again. There would be no trust in this relationship so why bother?
Oh yes, because it's Edward and Bella!
