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8/23/2012 c40 allthelittlestars
I think it was a rather abrupt ending to things. They were only just starting to date again. But, I can respect your decision to mark this complete. If you feel inclined to do so, a future-take would be great. It can really tie up the story nicely.
8/20/2012 c40 3dunedin girl
I loved this story, hopefully we'll get a glimpse of the date?
8/12/2012 c40 got10
It's over? :( I wanna find out what happens on Bella & Edwards date.
8/12/2012 c40 2HopeStreet
I am hopeful for both Edward and Bella, but even if this relationship comes to an end, I think they'll end it on better terms than the first time and be able to move on without any bad feelings between them. They are both emotionally stronger and more mature and better able to handle the bumps along the way.

I didn't want this story to end. Thank you for writing this!
8/12/2012 c40 HollettLA
Congratulations on finishing your story! Good job!

Lisa
8/11/2012 c40 JustSu
Thank you for giving me such a different kind of fic. Different in a very good way, don't get me wrong. I usually don't like very much HS fics, but this one really got me. And the second part, the college part, i enjoyed immensely because I felt it real and down to earth. Real situations and real feelings. I can relate easily on Bella's confusion and fear.
Thanks again.
Have fun and keep writing!
8/11/2012 c40 HockeyChick10
Can't wait for their date!
8/10/2012 c40 sujari6
Looks like things are going to work out for them.
8/10/2012 c40 twilightmom96
can we have an epilogue set in the future
and i really loved this
8/10/2012 c40 DawnsWhimsy
I like the ending but will you be coming back soon with a little future-take perhaps? I would love that :) Thank You for writing and sharing this story with us.
8/10/2012 c40 Kgunter34
Thanks for the great story.
7/3/2012 c39 India2523
Oh God what's coming next?
7/3/2012 c39 RobsPantsfiddler
love it!
7/3/2012 c39 adt216
Great chapter
7/3/2012 c39 kfoll
Sorry, but like Bella said, people do not change and do a 180 overnight. If he had the morals of an alley cat at 18 (not a kid) then he still has the capacity to be that way now. Once a cheater gets away with it once, whats to stop him doing it again. There would be no trust in this relationship so why bother?
Oh yes, because it's Edward and Bella!
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