for When He Got Back4/29/2011 c1 
11Mango517
Love the story and the LSD episode was the greatest - I simply loved it all because it was just soooo weird!
11Mango517Love the story and the LSD episode was the greatest - I simply loved it all because it was just soooo weird!
4/17/2011 c1 angellcakes23
That must have been my top favorite scenes on that episode! I just rewatched it and I just noticed that part where Peter says that tickles lol, I desolved into giggles haha.
That must have been my top favorite scenes on that episode! I just rewatched it and I just noticed that part where Peter says that tickles lol, I desolved into giggles haha.
4/17/2011 c1 58Cerulean.Phoenix7
That was such a hilarious moment wasn't it? I liked how you made a reference to Star Trek with the ray gun and also how you described Peter's changed perspective once he started tripping.
58Cerulean.Phoenix7That was such a hilarious moment wasn't it? I liked how you made a reference to Star Trek with the ray gun and also how you described Peter's changed perspective once he started tripping.
4/17/2011 c1 4kwirky
HAHAHHAA!
My sister and I were watching this episode together, and we seriously re-watched that scene (gotta love tivo) like ten times! When I first saw the previews for this episode, I was thinking to myself "Oh this is gonna be good. Peter's gonna get high!" And I got so much more than I had expected with the "you're BALD!" comment and the fact that Broyles got high too!
I've been hoping that some one would write something like this explaining Peter's thoughts as the drugs first took effect. And you did a wonderful job!
Plus I loved that line at the end. I was just like, "AWWWW... Even when he's tripping his brains out, Peter is still thinking about Olivia!"
Lastly, am I the only one who has kind of (in the back of her mind) thought that Broyles actually IS an Observer? It was only like the fourth episode in season one when I was like, "AHH! Broyles is a black Observer!" (I am only half kidding... :P)
Anyways, my ranting aside, you did really well on this. I'm no English professor, but I did not notice any huge grammatical mistakes, the characterization was spot on, and it was all just really well put together. :) :)
Now, I'm gonna go read it again...
great job!
~Kwirky
4kwirkyHAHAHHAA!
My sister and I were watching this episode together, and we seriously re-watched that scene (gotta love tivo) like ten times! When I first saw the previews for this episode, I was thinking to myself "Oh this is gonna be good. Peter's gonna get high!" And I got so much more than I had expected with the "you're BALD!" comment and the fact that Broyles got high too!
I've been hoping that some one would write something like this explaining Peter's thoughts as the drugs first took effect. And you did a wonderful job!
Plus I loved that line at the end. I was just like, "AWWWW... Even when he's tripping his brains out, Peter is still thinking about Olivia!"
Lastly, am I the only one who has kind of (in the back of her mind) thought that Broyles actually IS an Observer? It was only like the fourth episode in season one when I was like, "AHH! Broyles is a black Observer!" (I am only half kidding... :P)
Anyways, my ranting aside, you did really well on this. I'm no English professor, but I did not notice any huge grammatical mistakes, the characterization was spot on, and it was all just really well put together. :) :)
Now, I'm gonna go read it again...
great job!
~Kwirky