for More Between Us Than A Wall10/20/2012 c47 Guest
Hi,
I know nothing about "Heroes", but the story premise sounded interesting so I read it anyways. Since I have not idea who Peter, Sylar and what the powers are things were a little confusing at times, but this has still been a very fascinating story to read, I have really enjoyed reading this. I especially loved the switching back and forth between the POVs, I think you guys are doing a great job with that.
So thank you, and Ilooking forward to the rest of it!
Hi,
I know nothing about "Heroes", but the story premise sounded interesting so I read it anyways. Since I have not idea who Peter, Sylar and what the powers are things were a little confusing at times, but this has still been a very fascinating story to read, I have really enjoyed reading this. I especially loved the switching back and forth between the POVs, I think you guys are doing a great job with that.
So thank you, and Ilooking forward to the rest of it!
10/16/2012 c39 
10kogasgal27
I love the way Peter and Sylar react to each other and how they totally over think everything the other one does. This story is so well written.
10kogasgal27I love the way Peter and Sylar react to each other and how they totally over think everything the other one does. This story is so well written.
9/29/2012 c46 DH L'Orange
Thanks for the update! really enjoying this
Thanks for the update! really enjoying this
9/29/2012 c46 1likegallows
There is so much I love about the two of them in this chapter that I think it would take me just shy of as many words as written above to say so! Bless Peter and his trying to make all the mental leaps to connect all the dots that Sylar leaves hidden and get the bigger picture. I think Peter is definitely working what information he can to the best to try and piece together the bigger picture. And I love the offset of the puzzle because being such a mundane task, it speaks volumes of what the two of them are trying to do together whether they realize it or not. Work those pieces together. Admirable of PEter even if he's a bit thick BUT he's not exactly working with all the pieces now is he?
I also loved Peter needing to get affirmation that Nathan is really gone and it's completely understandable Sylar's first reaction is I'm fine! Thanks! Like anyone has bothered to ask what that mind-fudgery did to him.
And the last few paragraphs- brilliant. Peter trying so hard to reach out and basically being like screw it- Sylar here is what you need to do if you want people to have regard for you. And then "To hear it from Peter made him feel warmer, more like a likable, nice person…or a person at all – so rarely did he hear that and so much did he want to. That means nothing now! It's useless!" AH my heart breaks and swells at the same time.
Basically, I adored the development in this chapter. :)
1likegallowsThere is so much I love about the two of them in this chapter that I think it would take me just shy of as many words as written above to say so! Bless Peter and his trying to make all the mental leaps to connect all the dots that Sylar leaves hidden and get the bigger picture. I think Peter is definitely working what information he can to the best to try and piece together the bigger picture. And I love the offset of the puzzle because being such a mundane task, it speaks volumes of what the two of them are trying to do together whether they realize it or not. Work those pieces together. Admirable of PEter even if he's a bit thick BUT he's not exactly working with all the pieces now is he?
I also loved Peter needing to get affirmation that Nathan is really gone and it's completely understandable Sylar's first reaction is I'm fine! Thanks! Like anyone has bothered to ask what that mind-fudgery did to him.
And the last few paragraphs- brilliant. Peter trying so hard to reach out and basically being like screw it- Sylar here is what you need to do if you want people to have regard for you. And then "To hear it from Peter made him feel warmer, more like a likable, nice person…or a person at all – so rarely did he hear that and so much did he want to. That means nothing now! It's useless!" AH my heart breaks and swells at the same time.
Basically, I adored the development in this chapter. :)
9/24/2012 c11 Z
You know what? I love you ! I am so loving this story and you !
Even I wish you write this story day by day until they got out of that wall. (Actually I liked they in there together 'forever', but, you know, I also wanted to see how they would live after this incident..) Anyway, My wish is your would write this fiction about 'every' day of them, but, I know it's almost impossible, isn't it?
I just read chapter11, yet, I fall in love this story and just want to let you know that ! Thanx for the work and now I'm going to read next chaper !
You know what? I love you ! I am so loving this story and you !
Even I wish you write this story day by day until they got out of that wall. (Actually I liked they in there together 'forever', but, you know, I also wanted to see how they would live after this incident..) Anyway, My wish is your would write this fiction about 'every' day of them, but, I know it's almost impossible, isn't it?
I just read chapter11, yet, I fall in love this story and just want to let you know that ! Thanx for the work and now I'm going to read next chaper !
8/11/2012 c44 4SKC83
Alright updates! What a pleasant surprise! I've just noticed that you're coming up to Christmas day ... Are they gonna notice I wonder? I'll be looking forward to your next update!
4SKC83Alright updates! What a pleasant surprise! I've just noticed that you're coming up to Christmas day ... Are they gonna notice I wonder? I'll be looking forward to your next update!
8/9/2012 c44 DH L'Orange
Well this chapter feels like they finally came over the first hump in the road; I can see the beginnings of a tentative friendship. Thanks for the update.
Well this chapter feels like they finally came over the first hump in the road; I can see the beginnings of a tentative friendship. Thanks for the update.
8/8/2012 c44 likegallows
i'm so hooked and can't wait for more. i love that things are still tense between them- and likely will be for so long- but they're getting to that stopping starting stopping starting again point and actually making a bit of headway. i can't wait for the time peter gets a little bit more out of sylar. ugh and the pathetic boring insignificant dodging speaking about his past? love it. and peter's self realisation of how sad that is compared to other people he met in his occupation.
magnificent as always!
i'm so hooked and can't wait for more. i love that things are still tense between them- and likely will be for so long- but they're getting to that stopping starting stopping starting again point and actually making a bit of headway. i can't wait for the time peter gets a little bit more out of sylar. ugh and the pathetic boring insignificant dodging speaking about his past? love it. and peter's self realisation of how sad that is compared to other people he met in his occupation.
magnificent as always!
8/7/2012 c43 xlunasxgrisx
I am loving this whole entire story.
The tension kills me...in a good way.
I'm so excited and looking forward to reading more.
Please update soon! :D
I am loving this whole entire story.
The tension kills me...in a good way.
I'm so excited and looking forward to reading more.
Please update soon! :D
8/1/2012 c43 cammie00
So glad to see the next chapter up! Love your story. You and petrelli heiress write my favorite petlar stories. I prefer the ones where they don't start out together. Can't wait till next chapter is up.
So glad to see the next chapter up! Love your story. You and petrelli heiress write my favorite petlar stories. I prefer the ones where they don't start out together. Can't wait till next chapter is up.