for More Between Us Than A Wall1/16/2012 c27 
1Chiooti
Gosh, i love the flirting part XD
i also like the part where Peter thinks about Killer admitting he got upset and killed someone and let the officer cuff him, then confess that 'They had it coming.' 'He's dead, I made sure of that.' '…this is my thank you?'
wow, now that doesn't make sense. it sounds really like a psycho person XD
i totally love the ending part.
"Because you're different."
Because I am the hero – I'm fighting you.
especially, i love the above quotes.
it was an awesome chapter =D
1ChiootiGosh, i love the flirting part XD
i also like the part where Peter thinks about Killer admitting he got upset and killed someone and let the officer cuff him, then confess that 'They had it coming.' 'He's dead, I made sure of that.' '…this is my thank you?'
wow, now that doesn't make sense. it sounds really like a psycho person XD
i totally love the ending part.
"Because you're different."
Because I am the hero – I'm fighting you.
especially, i love the above quotes.
it was an awesome chapter =D
1/15/2012 c26 Chiooti
i totally loved it! XD
you write Peter and Sylar's points of view so swell!
i can't wait for them to become more close to each other =D
Can't wait for the next chapter
i totally loved it! XD
you write Peter and Sylar's points of view so swell!
i can't wait for them to become more close to each other =D
Can't wait for the next chapter
11/30/2011 c22 John
I can't wait to read the next chapter
I can't wait to read the next chapter
11/5/2011 c17 nonreader
wow you updated so fast. I hope you continue this way. I can't wait to read more. I really like this stroy.
wow you updated so fast. I hope you continue this way. I can't wait to read more. I really like this stroy.
11/4/2011 c16 Guest
lovin itplease update soon
lovin itplease update soon
10/12/2011 c13 1FairLuthien
Okay, this story has been quite a ride for me the last week. This is a very good story, and I commend you both for doing such a fabulous job with these two characters and the story in general. I was very happy to see a story about this part of the series. I look forward to more chapters!
1FairLuthienOkay, this story has been quite a ride for me the last week. This is a very good story, and I commend you both for doing such a fabulous job with these two characters and the story in general. I was very happy to see a story about this part of the series. I look forward to more chapters!
9/16/2011 c1 Lexicon
I've always enjoyed stories where a scene is taken and expanded upon by getting inside the characters heads. While I suppose I like visual media best it can't hold a candle to the written word when it comes to delving into characters.
I've always enjoyed stories where a scene is taken and expanded upon by getting inside the characters heads. While I suppose I like visual media best it can't hold a candle to the written word when it comes to delving into characters.
8/18/2011 c11 18Konoha's Kage
Maybe I'm just too impressed... but dead skunk... (snort) I love it. This is probably the first roleplay fic I've read all the way through. Great job!
18Konoha's KageMaybe I'm just too impressed... but dead skunk... (snort) I love it. This is probably the first roleplay fic I've read all the way through. Great job!
8/10/2011 c11 9CommodoreOblivious
Thanks for such a lovely update. I like that they're trying to get alone, even just a bit. ^_^
9CommodoreObliviousThanks for such a lovely update. I like that they're trying to get alone, even just a bit. ^_^
7/18/2011 c2 17cheZaswulf
constantly switching perspectives is a little bit confusing and hard to follow when one question isn't answered until two or three paragraphs later. i guess that's because it's two authors instead of one?
17cheZaswulfconstantly switching perspectives is a little bit confusing and hard to follow when one question isn't answered until two or three paragraphs later. i guess that's because it's two authors instead of one?
5/29/2011 c9 3Haruka The-Dark-Angel
wow, this chapter is really short compared to the other chapter...
3Haruka The-Dark-Angelwow, this chapter is really short compared to the other chapter...