for Meant To Be2/11/2012 c1 Crazybird
This is one of my favorite fanfictions! Thanks so much for writing this!
Metalbeak: Thats right Nyra, you just enjoy your new husband and forget about your old one as he rots in Hagsmire. I don't need you anyway!
Allomere: Hello Metal Beak.
Metal Beak: Allomere! Hi! How are you?
Allomere: Oh, i'm fine. I was killed by the son of a old friend mine. But you... YOU SON OF A HAGSFIEND!
Metal Beak: !
Allomere: I TRUSTED YOU! AFTER EVERYTHING I WENT THROUGH FOR YOU! YOU PROMISED I WOULD BE KING OF THE GREAT TREE! BUT INSTEAD YOU SEND BATS TO ATTACK ME!
Metal Beak: Oh, yeah, uh... About that...It was Nyra's idea!
Allomere: Well lucky for me I made some new friends. GET HIM HAGSFIENDS!
*Hagsfiends appear and attacks Metal Beak*
Allomere: Now you know. *Laughs evily*
Little joke:) LONG LIVE PURE ONES!
This is one of my favorite fanfictions! Thanks so much for writing this!
Metalbeak: Thats right Nyra, you just enjoy your new husband and forget about your old one as he rots in Hagsmire. I don't need you anyway!
Allomere: Hello Metal Beak.
Metal Beak: Allomere! Hi! How are you?
Allomere: Oh, i'm fine. I was killed by the son of a old friend mine. But you... YOU SON OF A HAGSFIEND!
Metal Beak: !
Allomere: I TRUSTED YOU! AFTER EVERYTHING I WENT THROUGH FOR YOU! YOU PROMISED I WOULD BE KING OF THE GREAT TREE! BUT INSTEAD YOU SEND BATS TO ATTACK ME!
Metal Beak: Oh, yeah, uh... About that...It was Nyra's idea!
Allomere: Well lucky for me I made some new friends. GET HIM HAGSFIENDS!
*Hagsfiends appear and attacks Metal Beak*
Allomere: Now you know. *Laughs evily*
Little joke:) LONG LIVE PURE ONES!
6/15/2011 c1 
4Mrs. Semple
This is excellent so far! i really enjoyed reading this as of yet. Keep up the good work!
4Mrs. SempleThis is excellent so far! i really enjoyed reading this as of yet. Keep up the good work!
5/14/2011 c1 1Rainsong2010
Great short story, quite a battlefield promotion kludd got. I could definitely see this scenario, nyra pushing someone she could control to be high ty to.
1Rainsong2010Great short story, quite a battlefield promotion kludd got. I could definitely see this scenario, nyra pushing someone she could control to be high ty to.
5/11/2011 c1 Milamber
Nice! I love this pairing, and your one-shot is quite good. I look forward reading more of your work :)
Nice! I love this pairing, and your one-shot is quite good. I look forward reading more of your work :)
4/19/2011 c1 Ryukn7
awesome love it. btw this is Ryuk from the reviews from your story "Welcome to Ga'hoole" finaly made myself an account and i cant wait to see your 2 storys that will continue the side for LOTG and POM
awesome love it. btw this is Ryuk from the reviews from your story "Welcome to Ga'hoole" finaly made myself an account and i cant wait to see your 2 storys that will continue the side for LOTG and POM