for Ordinary11/4/2011 c2 CrayonsPink
This is a great story so far! I really like it. I can't wait to see what happens next!
This is a great story so far! I really like it. I can't wait to see what happens next!
7/11/2011 c2 Peculiar Daze
Youuuu should update. I'm really curious about this, and I love your writing. You're good. Add in the little to no grammar or spelling mistakes, and everything is just great.
Update soon. Seriously. :3
I need moreeee~
And I love your Scorpius. =w=
Youuuu should update. I'm really curious about this, and I love your writing. You're good. Add in the little to no grammar or spelling mistakes, and everything is just great.
Update soon. Seriously. :3
I need moreeee~
And I love your Scorpius. =w=
5/16/2011 c2 
10Mebina Sobriquet
Please don't abanndon this story- it's really good! I love your new version of Scorpius, he's not too wimpy or too powerful, but just right. Well done. MS x
10Mebina SobriquetPlease don't abanndon this story- it's really good! I love your new version of Scorpius, he's not too wimpy or too powerful, but just right. Well done. MS x
5/16/2011 c2 4Waldojeffers
Damn... I forgot all about this story! Definitely my mistake as it had a brilliant start. And this next chapter is just as good... I'm kind of startled why your review count isn't higher but I guess not everyone recognize quality when seeing it. :P
Anyway, still very much like your version of Scorpius, although I have to say it looks like he's losing some of the bravery that we saw in him at the sorting. I guess that's what a hating Gryffindor house for 5 years can do to you... I feel very sorry for him, poor boy. :(
Now, your Albus is starting to be more interesting as well. Looks like he's developing himself into a genuinely caring person, and that for a Slytherin! :P Starting to like him as well. And honestly, my first thoughts were the same as Albus when I read about Scorpius being out there.
Very good 2nd chapter, I'm curious if you can keep this up like this. But I do trust you. :)
4WaldojeffersDamn... I forgot all about this story! Definitely my mistake as it had a brilliant start. And this next chapter is just as good... I'm kind of startled why your review count isn't higher but I guess not everyone recognize quality when seeing it. :P
Anyway, still very much like your version of Scorpius, although I have to say it looks like he's losing some of the bravery that we saw in him at the sorting. I guess that's what a hating Gryffindor house for 5 years can do to you... I feel very sorry for him, poor boy. :(
Now, your Albus is starting to be more interesting as well. Looks like he's developing himself into a genuinely caring person, and that for a Slytherin! :P Starting to like him as well. And honestly, my first thoughts were the same as Albus when I read about Scorpius being out there.
Very good 2nd chapter, I'm curious if you can keep this up like this. But I do trust you. :)
5/12/2011 c2 3PageNotFound404
another brilliant chapter...
the interaction between albus and scorpius was very realistic.
an overdue reunion of strangers, if that makes sense.
i can't wait for the next chapter.
3PageNotFound404another brilliant chapter...
the interaction between albus and scorpius was very realistic.
an overdue reunion of strangers, if that makes sense.
i can't wait for the next chapter.
5/12/2011 c1 suzulen
Thank you for writing this story!
I love it! I love it! I love it!
Please continue /. I beg you!
Thank you!
Thank you for writing this story!
I love it! I love it! I love it!
Please continue /. I beg you!
Thank you!
5/6/2011 c1 PageNotFound404
you should definitely continue with the story...
it has a great plot and amazing start...
I can't wait to read more...
:)
you should definitely continue with the story...
it has a great plot and amazing start...
I can't wait to read more...
:)
4/23/2011 c1 10Mebina Sobriquet
Please continue! I love the new way you are taking the characters, and would love to see hogwarts houses coming together as one school in the new generation! Awesome story so far :)
10Mebina SobriquetPlease continue! I love the new way you are taking the characters, and would love to see hogwarts houses coming together as one school in the new generation! Awesome story so far :)
4/22/2011 c1 Guest
YES CONTINUE! You wouldn't just leave me hanging, would you? Finishfinishfinish! ;D
YES CONTINUE! You wouldn't just leave me hanging, would you? Finishfinishfinish! ;D
4/21/2011 c1 4Waldojeffers
This is a surprise, quite an impressive start really. Your characterization of Scorpius is to say the least interesting. You don't often see a brave Gryffindor Scorpius like that. So far that definitely works, I'm totally believing him: good job on our Malfoy!
We haven't seen nearly as much of Albus as we've seen of Scorpius but I have a feeling his characterization won't be bad either: a Slytherin-Albus isn't exactly new but you seem to give it a new twist by letting him choose for it, inspired by Scorpius' bravery. (I almost wrote Scorpius' balls but that sounded a bit odd)
An impressive first chapter, if everything that is about to come will be at least as good, I'll be hooked up to this. So yeah, you have to continue this! Not that you actually needed my permission... (- bad joke playing on your name :P)
4WaldojeffersThis is a surprise, quite an impressive start really. Your characterization of Scorpius is to say the least interesting. You don't often see a brave Gryffindor Scorpius like that. So far that definitely works, I'm totally believing him: good job on our Malfoy!
We haven't seen nearly as much of Albus as we've seen of Scorpius but I have a feeling his characterization won't be bad either: a Slytherin-Albus isn't exactly new but you seem to give it a new twist by letting him choose for it, inspired by Scorpius' bravery. (I almost wrote Scorpius' balls but that sounded a bit odd)
An impressive first chapter, if everything that is about to come will be at least as good, I'll be hooked up to this. So yeah, you have to continue this! Not that you actually needed my permission... (- bad joke playing on your name :P)
4/20/2011 c1 Franjipani 123
Yes, please do continue! I'm really enjoying this story so far, I love Albus and Scorpius stories :)
You've put an interesting spin on Scorpius' character by making him so bold but it works. I can't wait to hear more. Good work on the long chapter.
Update soon pleaaasse xxx
Yes, please do continue! I'm really enjoying this story so far, I love Albus and Scorpius stories :)
You've put an interesting spin on Scorpius' character by making him so bold but it works. I can't wait to hear more. Good work on the long chapter.
Update soon pleaaasse xxx
4/20/2011 c1 birds of morrigan
yesss! please! i haven't read a well written fic in awhile (it's making me sad) so you need to continue
yesss! please! i haven't read a well written fic in awhile (it's making me sad) so you need to continue
4/20/2011 c1 star89
I would continue with the story it seems interesting and you have an excellent writing style with very few mistakes that i could see.
Keep up with the good work cause i really like the balls of steel scorpius :D!
star89
I would continue with the story it seems interesting and you have an excellent writing style with very few mistakes that i could see.
Keep up with the good work cause i really like the balls of steel scorpius :D!
star89