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7TealCrystalCAT
This is so randomly awsome, even if it's not your best work. I'm kinda wondering why Kim would let all three of her children become yellow rangers though, I would expect her to have at least one pink. I really love the kids though, I hope to see more!
7TealCrystalCATThis is so randomly awsome, even if it's not your best work. I'm kinda wondering why Kim would let all three of her children become yellow rangers though, I would expect her to have at least one pink. I really love the kids though, I hope to see more!
4/23/2011 c5 15Michelle the Editor
I get what you mean about it being your old writing, but even for old writing this is pretty good! The adorableness and humor have a nice plotty backbeat, and everyone is so in-character that I only rarely wonder about logical questions, like why a single woman would end up with three foster kids. You don't yank Kimberly, Tommy or Billy out of character for the romance, and Kimberly's adjusted the way I wish a lot of fics would write her-not eternally moaning about how she dumped Tommy. It was only a high school relationship, after all.
15Michelle the EditorI get what you mean about it being your old writing, but even for old writing this is pretty good! The adorableness and humor have a nice plotty backbeat, and everyone is so in-character that I only rarely wonder about logical questions, like why a single woman would end up with three foster kids. You don't yank Kimberly, Tommy or Billy out of character for the romance, and Kimberly's adjusted the way I wish a lot of fics would write her-not eternally moaning about how she dumped Tommy. It was only a high school relationship, after all.
4/21/2011 c2 ae1102
Great start I was wondering I see that kat and tommy will be a couple will there be others ? And what powers /colors will the rangers have?
Great start I was wondering I see that kat and tommy will be a couple will there be others ? And what powers /colors will the rangers have?
4/20/2011 c2 Jeanka
This is such a fun story. Nice to hear your take on where our heroes are. Please continue.
This is such a fun story. Nice to hear your take on where our heroes are. Please continue.
4/20/2011 c2 6Kellybird
Hey this is actually pretty good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. But I think you made a mistake in chapter 1. Ernie asks about Ashley, TJ, Cassie and Andros; I think it should have been Carlos not Andros since he asks who Andros is after Jerome mentions him. Just a small error.
Keep em coming.
6KellybirdHey this is actually pretty good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. But I think you made a mistake in chapter 1. Ernie asks about Ashley, TJ, Cassie and Andros; I think it should have been Carlos not Andros since he asks who Andros is after Jerome mentions him. Just a small error.
Keep em coming.