for A Shade of Orange4/30 c1 
1ZyriaYP01
I don't think you should rewrite it, but I do think you ahould do a chapter on the time force lightspeed crossover.
1ZyriaYP01I don't think you should rewrite it, but I do think you ahould do a chapter on the time force lightspeed crossover.
3/21 c21 Alex B. Goode
Oh man. I was really hoping in this version, Ryan would stay. You could rewrite it that way. Not a bad idea. Keep up the great work.
Oh man. I was really hoping in this version, Ryan would stay. You could rewrite it that way. Not a bad idea. Keep up the great work.
3/21 c16 Alex B. Goode
Remember a general point of view is better then just one person. But nice job.
Remember a general point of view is better then just one person. But nice job.