for A Fishcake's affair5/19 c49 Guest
Will tetsuko earn naruto trust. I was thinking. Please addlemon scenes. A naruto x tetsuko lemon scene unless they are related. Have naruto have lemon scenes with tsunami.
Will tetsuko earn naruto trust. I was thinking. Please addlemon scenes. A naruto x tetsuko lemon scene unless they are related. Have naruto have lemon scenes with tsunami.
5/16 c14 sebastian
Did you just use an 80's montage for the training scene? Anyway as allways an awesome chapter.
Did you just use an 80's montage for the training scene? Anyway as allways an awesome chapter.
5/16 c49 Guest
please update...this is without doubt the best story on this website...so pllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update...am dying to read more !
please update...this is without doubt the best story on this website...so pllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update...am dying to read more !
5/15 c49 deathcurse97
hey man, don't know if you'll see this but i hope you will carry on with this story of yours cause it is really good, i honestly wanna see what happens to naruto next and if he'll ever manage to find kisara once again. Hope you don't give upon your story, or if u have changed to another site, let me know which one so i can continue following it(:
hey man, don't know if you'll see this but i hope you will carry on with this story of yours cause it is really good, i honestly wanna see what happens to naruto next and if he'll ever manage to find kisara once again. Hope you don't give upon your story, or if u have changed to another site, let me know which one so i can continue following it(:
5/13 c49 Nerfhearder69
Y'all certainly like convoluted plots! Enjoying your produce immensely, hope to see more soon!
Y'all certainly like convoluted plots! Enjoying your produce immensely, hope to see more soon!
5/10 c49 jay
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeee
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeee
5/7 c49 Lednacek
i wanted to ask many chapters ago. is it possible to get both seals on one body. the seals that naruto and kurenai got.
i wanted to ask many chapters ago. is it possible to get both seals on one body. the seals that naruto and kurenai got.
5/1 c49 Guest
You never answered how strong naruto in your story is currently. Please update.
You never answered how strong naruto in your story is currently. Please update.
4/26 c27 dijohn
Your bingo description started out okay, but then you sounded to emotional and opinionated. Please rephrase.
Your bingo description started out okay, but then you sounded to emotional and opinionated. Please rephrase.
14/26 c49 misel1
Absolutely love this story just everything about i how he has so many who like him but aren't ** his new philosophy how there is conflict romantic wise and story wise like asuma and kurenai speaking of which i do believe the original Japanese name is yuuhi kurenai not yuhi but i may be wrong i would also love to see the blood prison arc i think it would fit but i think he should go in for a different reason than in cannon because with his mentality that might break him a lot more than it did in cannon i have a few other suggestions if you want to hear them but otherwise great story and can't wait for the next chapter
Absolutely love this story just everything about i how he has so many who like him but aren't ** his new philosophy how there is conflict romantic wise and story wise like asuma and kurenai speaking of which i do believe the original Japanese name is yuuhi kurenai not yuhi but i may be wrong i would also love to see the blood prison arc i think it would fit but i think he should go in for a different reason than in cannon because with his mentality that might break him a lot more than it did in cannon i have a few other suggestions if you want to hear them but otherwise great story and can't wait for the next chapter
4/26 c49 Luc1v3r
I don't have the words to describe it.
Secreat after so much secreat revealed bit by bits, for me your fic its a true ninja fanfic ever i read.
If my friends ask where to read a good dark naruto fic. Yours truly are.
Ps: just do me a vavor don't make a flasy jutsu for naruto please, cuz the current can be upgrade more don't do you thinks.
I don't have the words to describe it.
Secreat after so much secreat revealed bit by bits, for me your fic its a true ninja fanfic ever i read.
If my friends ask where to read a good dark naruto fic. Yours truly are.
Ps: just do me a vavor don't make a flasy jutsu for naruto please, cuz the current can be upgrade more don't do you thinks.
4/24 c49 old fan of yous
ibeen here since the start hard to belive its been about what? 3 years just wanted to tell you iloved the beggining and was thrilled waiting for a new chapter to come out but now... no ofence but idont really like the way its going and iknow you are trying or already made this a dark fic ijust wish you would go back to the begining and see that your turning this story with started of great into nothing to many complicated things ,to many detail in everything like every 5 lines reminding me that naruto worked for the yakuza and stuff ijust wish you would go back this is probably my 20 review of your story and probably my last well see how the next chapter turns out fan of yours(tiburon171)
ibeen here since the start hard to belive its been about what? 3 years just wanted to tell you iloved the beggining and was thrilled waiting for a new chapter to come out but now... no ofence but idont really like the way its going and iknow you are trying or already made this a dark fic ijust wish you would go back to the begining and see that your turning this story with started of great into nothing to many complicated things ,to many detail in everything like every 5 lines reminding me that naruto worked for the yakuza and stuff ijust wish you would go back this is probably my 20 review of your story and probably my last well see how the next chapter turns out fan of yours(tiburon171)