for The Xmen Present: King GrislyBeard11/3/2011 c1 
5A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy
hahahahahahahaha! go Logan! teach that jean a lesson! haha! :D and you're right, it is totally more a Logan/Jean than Scott/Jean or Logan/Ororo! this story was pretty entertaining! :D though most of them are!
luve,
Fairy!
5A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairyhahahahahahahaha! go Logan! teach that jean a lesson! haha! :D and you're right, it is totally more a Logan/Jean than Scott/Jean or Logan/Ororo! this story was pretty entertaining! :D though most of them are!
luve,
Fairy!
8/2/2011 c1 2SweetestSong23
Wasn't it King Thrushbeard originally? Hmm. Nice job with all of your X-Men Present stories!
2SweetestSong23Wasn't it King Thrushbeard originally? Hmm. Nice job with all of your X-Men Present stories!
6/23/2011 c1 jazzren92
I loved The Twelve Dancing Princesses so much I sat and read the rest of the X-men Presents stories as well and although I may have gotten in trouble for not doing my chores it was definitely worth it :D I don't know if anyone else has asked you this but have you thought about doing one for The Princess Bride? Just a suggestion :)
I loved The Twelve Dancing Princesses so much I sat and read the rest of the X-men Presents stories as well and although I may have gotten in trouble for not doing my chores it was definitely worth it :D I don't know if anyone else has asked you this but have you thought about doing one for The Princess Bride? Just a suggestion :)
5/20/2011 c1 20Thomas Linquist
Nice story. I'd forgotten the original tale until I got into your version.
Jean stuck on herself? I just don't see it. Not from her movie incarnations.
The last line was precious! "that Hugh Jackman guy"! Har!
20Thomas LinquistNice story. I'd forgotten the original tale until I got into your version.
Jean stuck on herself? I just don't see it. Not from her movie incarnations.
The last line was precious! "that Hugh Jackman guy"! Har!
5/2/2011 c1 1MaddAlice
I have to say this is the first of The Xmen Presents stories, that I have not heard of before. It was lovely :)
1MaddAliceI have to say this is the first of The Xmen Presents stories, that I have not heard of before. It was lovely :)
5/1/2011 c1 10TheAnnoyingOne97
I like it. Even though I don't really like the Logan/Jean pairng(LOGAN/STORMY ALL THE WAY!) it was still a good story:) Can't wait to read the Thumbelina story! Hurry and write and new one!
10TheAnnoyingOne97I like it. Even though I don't really like the Logan/Jean pairng(LOGAN/STORMY ALL THE WAY!) it was still a good story:) Can't wait to read the Thumbelina story! Hurry and write and new one!
4/27/2011 c1 8roguelover321
this put a smile on my face i dont mind jean/logan put i do hate rogue/logan
do more
and how about(for a new story) tangeled (yes rogue and gambit love story)
8roguelover321this put a smile on my face i dont mind jean/logan put i do hate rogue/logan
do more
and how about(for a new story) tangeled (yes rogue and gambit love story)
4/27/2011 c1 SuniGyrl
Good job hon! You picked just the right characters for this. Jean definitely makes a good spoiled princess. Her comments were hilarious! And so was Remy, as always. I love the banter that he and Rogue add. I was wondering where Ororo was, or why she wasn't commenting, but I figure that she's secure enough in her relationship with Logan to sit this one out and not get upset that he's 'married' to another woman in this. Though I am very curious as to which story you will use that features Logan/Ororo. And to hear the comments from the peanut gallery on their relationship. That should be good!
Kisses Doll xoxoxo
Jesus Loves You and So Do I!
Halle ;D
Good job hon! You picked just the right characters for this. Jean definitely makes a good spoiled princess. Her comments were hilarious! And so was Remy, as always. I love the banter that he and Rogue add. I was wondering where Ororo was, or why she wasn't commenting, but I figure that she's secure enough in her relationship with Logan to sit this one out and not get upset that he's 'married' to another woman in this. Though I am very curious as to which story you will use that features Logan/Ororo. And to hear the comments from the peanut gallery on their relationship. That should be good!
Kisses Doll xoxoxo
Jesus Loves You and So Do I!
Halle ;D
4/27/2011 c1 1I Skip-I Trip-I Fall
Ha ha ha ha. I love this. Rogue has stopped her feminist rants. That was a pity. Oh well.
1I Skip-I Trip-I FallHa ha ha ha. I love this. Rogue has stopped her feminist rants. That was a pity. Oh well.
4/26/2011 c1 13Navigator101
This was rather humorous. I figured James was the King in actuality it just fit though I don't recall this fairytale. It was cute. Remy trying to picture Jean in a french maid outfit might be bad for his health though. Rogue is possessive.
13Navigator101This was rather humorous. I figured James was the King in actuality it just fit though I don't recall this fairytale. It was cute. Remy trying to picture Jean in a french maid outfit might be bad for his health though. Rogue is possessive.