for Stupid Thing5/8/2011 c2 layoung13
Great tale-you are such a good writer. hope you are writing quickly; I want to know where you are taking this. :)
Great tale-you are such a good writer. hope you are writing quickly; I want to know where you are taking this. :)
5/8/2011 c2 erintherese86
So glad you've got a new VM fic! And wow, Mac's in a bit of trouble. Loved the first chapter, I found it totally believable that they would end up like that too, not being able to deal with it. Even though you said V and Logan's relationship seems unresolvable, I hope you still get them back together (in the background anyway - Mac and Dick focus of course!). Looking forward to chapter 3!
So glad you've got a new VM fic! And wow, Mac's in a bit of trouble. Loved the first chapter, I found it totally believable that they would end up like that too, not being able to deal with it. Even though you said V and Logan's relationship seems unresolvable, I hope you still get them back together (in the background anyway - Mac and Dick focus of course!). Looking forward to chapter 3!
5/7/2011 c2 madilover
I really, really loved this update! I think you've done a great job of explaining how Mac's feeling and her thought process as she hides with Veronica. I especially loved how you explained her coming to the decision to keep the baby and raise it. I can not even tell you how much I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter (which will hopefully have her conversation with Dick in it). Thanks for the great chapter! :)
I really, really loved this update! I think you've done a great job of explaining how Mac's feeling and her thought process as she hides with Veronica. I especially loved how you explained her coming to the decision to keep the baby and raise it. I can not even tell you how much I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter (which will hopefully have her conversation with Dick in it). Thanks for the great chapter! :)
5/7/2011 c2 
1DevilJolie
I was so excited for the update. I really can't wait for the next chapter and for Dick's reaction. :)
1DevilJolieI was so excited for the update. I really can't wait for the next chapter and for Dick's reaction. :)
5/7/2011 c2 2RayneDramioneLoVe
Yay! I love updates :) can't wait for the convo with Dick...update soon!
2RayneDramioneLoVeYay! I love updates :) can't wait for the convo with Dick...update soon!
5/3/2011 c1 debbieja
Interesting premise. I am curious about if Mac will tell Dick and how he will respond to knowing their crazy, drunken night of mourning has lasting consequences.
Interesting premise. I am curious about if Mac will tell Dick and how he will respond to knowing their crazy, drunken night of mourning has lasting consequences.
4/30/2011 c1 5epic how
Your writing style is really beautiful. I hope you write for your vocation as well as for your/our entertainment! Excellent story-so good I thought about it the next day and that never, ever happens to me. Can't wait to read how you make all this play out.
Favorite line: "When he looked down he saw salvation in eyes that could drown a guy faster than any wave he'd ridden."
5epic howYour writing style is really beautiful. I hope you write for your vocation as well as for your/our entertainment! Excellent story-so good I thought about it the next day and that never, ever happens to me. Can't wait to read how you make all this play out.
Favorite line: "When he looked down he saw salvation in eyes that could drown a guy faster than any wave he'd ridden."
4/29/2011 c1 2RayneDramioneLoVe
LOVE IT! Absolutely can't wait for more! Will there be some LoVe in the future? I hope so ;)
2RayneDramioneLoVeLOVE IT! Absolutely can't wait for more! Will there be some LoVe in the future? I hope so ;)
4/29/2011 c1 madilover
I'm totally loving this so far! You write about their feelings and their reasons for their actions so beautifully it's heart-breaking! I especially love the last few lines of, an essential countdown to Mac stating that she's pregnant, that was a really nice touch! Great job and I can't wait to read more! =D
I'm totally loving this so far! You write about their feelings and their reasons for their actions so beautifully it's heart-breaking! I especially love the last few lines of, an essential countdown to Mac stating that she's pregnant, that was a really nice touch! Great job and I can't wait to read more! =D
4/28/2011 c1 layoung13
where'e the rest? :) hope you're in the mood to write! as usual, the writing was fantastic. you are an excellent writer. This phrase, " no light inside them, between them, or anywhere around", captures so much emotion. I was so in the mood for a good VM story and then for you to be the author to write it-what a splendid happening. waiting w/baited breath...
where'e the rest? :) hope you're in the mood to write! as usual, the writing was fantastic. you are an excellent writer. This phrase, " no light inside them, between them, or anywhere around", captures so much emotion. I was so in the mood for a good VM story and then for you to be the author to write it-what a splendid happening. waiting w/baited breath...
4/28/2011 c1 NahrBahr
Cant wait for some more madi! i am excited to read more!
Cant wait for some more madi! i am excited to read more!
4/28/2011 c1 Felicia1975
Interesting beginning. great first chapter, can't wait for more...wow Nice job
Interesting beginning. great first chapter, can't wait for more...wow Nice job