for I Can't Remember If I Love You4/25 c1 nono
dont get me wrong. But i read this fanfiction contains MPERG and i wish bobby in this story will go through it, please continue making stories about those two pairings they look lovely together
dont get me wrong. But i read this fanfiction contains MPERG and i wish bobby in this story will go through it, please continue making stories about those two pairings they look lovely together
12/19/2011 c15
2ZeldaRulesAll
O my goodness. I love this so much. I can't wait for the next chapter. Jean-Paul/Bobby has to be the best fan fic story EVER. You write it so well... also I love the way you write Remy's dialogue :D
2ZeldaRulesAllO my goodness. I love this so much. I can't wait for the next chapter. Jean-Paul/Bobby has to be the best fan fic story EVER. You write it so well... also I love the way you write Remy's dialogue :D
10/28/2011 c14
7thetwistedcelestials
Ooh, I liked the POV in this chapter; a story with fleshed out supporting characters are usually much more developed. The parallel structure of the day between each character was a great touch too. I like reading stories that pay attention to details like that.
Poor Scott. But, yay, a break in the gloom!
What? What's going on? Jono! And he's...! Ahh!
7thetwistedcelestialsOoh, I liked the POV in this chapter; a story with fleshed out supporting characters are usually much more developed. The parallel structure of the day between each character was a great touch too. I like reading stories that pay attention to details like that.
Poor Scott. But, yay, a break in the gloom!
What? What's going on? Jono! And he's...! Ahh!
10/8/2011 c13
1FrostyKoala
:) i cant wait for the next chapter! this one was good too tho :) keep it up!
1FrostyKoala:) i cant wait for the next chapter! this one was good too tho :) keep it up!
10/8/2011 c13 freakinaforest
Oooooh and now I've got this image of Jono clawing his way out his own grave, not that that could be a bad thing but it would seriously mess a person up having to do that methinks
Oooooh and now I've got this image of Jono clawing his way out his own grave, not that that could be a bad thing but it would seriously mess a person up having to do that methinks
9/27/2011 c12 freakinaforest
:) New chapter at last, but anyhow don't go on a downer that the chapter was short. Can't wait to find out how you're gonna resurrect Jono. Any chance that Ozymandias is due to make an appearance, or maybe you'll come up with something else?
:) New chapter at last, but anyhow don't go on a downer that the chapter was short. Can't wait to find out how you're gonna resurrect Jono. Any chance that Ozymandias is due to make an appearance, or maybe you'll come up with something else?
9/26/2011 c12
7thetwistedcelestials
Short yes, but with some nice plot development. I'm enjoying the story.
What is going on with Bobby? Will he ever realize how awesome Jean-Paul is? And the Bobby/Remy friend-chemistry is cute and fun and sweet.
Rogue seemed a bit different than in previous chapters. It's good to see some of the other members of the mansion popping up though. Looking forward to the next chapter.
7thetwistedcelestialsShort yes, but with some nice plot development. I'm enjoying the story.
What is going on with Bobby? Will he ever realize how awesome Jean-Paul is? And the Bobby/Remy friend-chemistry is cute and fun and sweet.
Rogue seemed a bit different than in previous chapters. It's good to see some of the other members of the mansion popping up though. Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/5/2011 c11
1FrostyKoala
This chapter was bitter sweet. Remy is finally getting back on good terms with a lot of people and him and Bobby, it seems, are getting closer. It's still sad about Jono though :'(. Please update soon!
1FrostyKoalaThis chapter was bitter sweet. Remy is finally getting back on good terms with a lot of people and him and Bobby, it seems, are getting closer. It's still sad about Jono though :'(. Please update soon!
9/3/2011 c10 Marvel-Lover
What? What! Oh no you didn't! You did not just kill my favorite! So help me god, if you killed him I'm going to find you and go staight crazy Iron Fist kung-fu on your ass! But you being a writer, I'm guessing you have a plan. But if that plan involves leaving him dead I'll find you and beat you into next week! *Deep breath* Okay, that being said, please update soon. :)
What? What! Oh no you didn't! You did not just kill my favorite! So help me god, if you killed him I'm going to find you and go staight crazy Iron Fist kung-fu on your ass! But you being a writer, I'm guessing you have a plan. But if that plan involves leaving him dead I'll find you and beat you into next week! *Deep breath* Okay, that being said, please update soon. :)
8/31/2011 c9 Guest
Give me more of this story or I will hunt you down! You do not just throw all my favorite X-Men into a story and not finish! Update!
Give me more of this story or I will hunt you down! You do not just throw all my favorite X-Men into a story and not finish! Update!
8/23/2011 c9 FrostyKoala
Ok, I really, really, really liked this one... but what was Bobby's second mutation? That's the main thing that i wanna know!
Ok, I really, really, really liked this one... but what was Bobby's second mutation? That's the main thing that i wanna know!
