for Initiation Rites4/27/2012 c1 
45LuckyTurtle
I really like this! It was kind of confusing-but that's probably just because I have a high fever right now and can barely see the screen in front of me. Hehe. Sorry in advance if I have any typos.
The writing of this fic was really good, and the feeling to it (though sad from where I'm sitting and how I read it) was intriguing.
I was looking for a Rachel/Sunshine fic, and was disappointed to find that there was only one (from what I can see so far), but I'm glad that this one was it, 'cause this was REALLY good!
I just really like the pairing, especially after just watching them sing in the bathroom (singing the song Telephone) 'cause I was watching that episode over again.
I really hope more Sunshine/Rachel fics get out there (though I doubt it), and hopefully your fic can be inspiration! Who knows, maybe I'll do one? Your fic definitely inspired ME enough.
GREAT job! :)
45LuckyTurtleI really like this! It was kind of confusing-but that's probably just because I have a high fever right now and can barely see the screen in front of me. Hehe. Sorry in advance if I have any typos.
The writing of this fic was really good, and the feeling to it (though sad from where I'm sitting and how I read it) was intriguing.
I was looking for a Rachel/Sunshine fic, and was disappointed to find that there was only one (from what I can see so far), but I'm glad that this one was it, 'cause this was REALLY good!
I just really like the pairing, especially after just watching them sing in the bathroom (singing the song Telephone) 'cause I was watching that episode over again.
I really hope more Sunshine/Rachel fics get out there (though I doubt it), and hopefully your fic can be inspiration! Who knows, maybe I'll do one? Your fic definitely inspired ME enough.
GREAT job! :)
5/28/2011 c1 27elitemassacre6
I liked this. I only realized I loved the idea of these two when i saw the finale. But now it's something I'm searching for...the right story to make me grab hold of the thought of them together and hold on tightly. This was a step in the right direction.
27elitemassacre6I liked this. I only realized I loved the idea of these two when i saw the finale. But now it's something I'm searching for...the right story to make me grab hold of the thought of them together and hold on tightly. This was a step in the right direction.