for Tailspin5/29 c20 Guest
Love your story can't wait for more.
Love your story can't wait for more.
5/22 c20 Guest
I would never want this Edward as my boyfriend. He is really a whore. I mean I'm not a virgin but for fucks sake this guy is disgusting.
I would never want this Edward as my boyfriend. He is really a whore. I mean I'm not a virgin but for fucks sake this guy is disgusting.
5/8 c20 frostedglaze
Edward really should have told Bella everything. Besides me , who else is surprised that Emmett is so insightful?
Edward really should have told Bella everything. Besides me , who else is surprised that Emmett is so insightful?
4/27 c20 leeses
GOD I HOPE HE GET THERE IN TIME. EMMITT SHOULD DITCH ROSE BUT HE LOVES HER AN WE ALL WANT TO SEE OUR BOYS HAPPY.
GOD I HOPE HE GET THERE IN TIME. EMMITT SHOULD DITCH ROSE BUT HE LOVES HER AN WE ALL WANT TO SEE OUR BOYS HAPPY.
4/27 c6 leeses
i JUST LIKE TO SAY I ONLY USUSALLY READ AU NOT ALL HUMAN BUT I STUMBLED ACROSS THIS AND GOT HOOKED. NICE JOB X
i JUST LIKE TO SAY I ONLY USUSALLY READ AU NOT ALL HUMAN BUT I STUMBLED ACROSS THIS AND GOT HOOKED. NICE JOB X
4/26 c20 brenda.warren.1257
you know for someone who acts dumb Emmitt is pretty smart and he does love hi brother and wants to see him happy and in love lets hope Edward and Bella get it and Alice minds her own business and stays out of thiers
you know for someone who acts dumb Emmitt is pretty smart and he does love hi brother and wants to see him happy and in love lets hope Edward and Bella get it and Alice minds her own business and stays out of thiers
4/26 c19 brenda.warren.1257
I think Alice should tend to her own business and stay out of Edwards and Bell's business and life how would she like someone in her business how many mor chapter to this story
I think Alice should tend to her own business and stay out of Edwards and Bell's business and life how would she like someone in her business how many mor chapter to this story
4/26 c20 vraylle
Loving this story. I like the Edward point of view better than Bella's. I guess we women get so caught up in the whirlwind its great to see such a honest straight to the point view. I love Edwards character, he's a great guy but still has flaws.
I'm betting that these two cant keep to there going slow agreement for much longer. Can't wait for more. :)
Loving this story. I like the Edward point of view better than Bella's. I guess we women get so caught up in the whirlwind its great to see such a honest straight to the point view. I love Edwards character, he's a great guy but still has flaws.
I'm betting that these two cant keep to there going slow agreement for much longer. Can't wait for more. :)
4/25 c20 Rita01tx
Here I was listenin' to Emmett brilliantly head shrinklin' Edward when I knock myself upside the head cause YOU are Em and Edward and Bella and everyone else in this story! I swear, I envy you and all the other authors who bring us such great stories! {Yes! I'm already all over Deviant and Fluffed!}
Here I was listenin' to Emmett brilliantly head shrinklin' Edward when I knock myself upside the head cause YOU are Em and Edward and Bella and everyone else in this story! I swear, I envy you and all the other authors who bring us such great stories! {Yes! I'm already all over Deviant and Fluffed!}
4/24 c20 pauleen
You gotta love Emmett. I know I do. He gave his brother sound advice and I hope Edward isn't too late in interceding Alice's efforts. I almost wish Emmetts words were recorded for Alice, so she would know the other side of the tale.
Comeback soon.
You gotta love Emmett. I know I do. He gave his brother sound advice and I hope Edward isn't too late in interceding Alice's efforts. I almost wish Emmetts words were recorded for Alice, so she would know the other side of the tale.
Comeback soon.
4/24 c20 ecullensgurl
Wow, who knew Emmett was that smart when it came to relationships? I think it really surprised Edward how knowledgeable Em was regarding his past and present sex life and what he needed to do to keep Bella. I really enjoy your story and was happy to see this update. I will say all your chaps have been well written, but this one really blew me away. Awesome job and great chap :)
Wow, who knew Emmett was that smart when it came to relationships? I think it really surprised Edward how knowledgeable Em was regarding his past and present sex life and what he needed to do to keep Bella. I really enjoy your story and was happy to see this update. I will say all your chaps have been well written, but this one really blew me away. Awesome job and great chap :)