for Quicksand2/5/2012 c1 
9niley4eva2012
haha at first i forgot who was the narrator i had to go back and read it again, but awesome job on the story!
9niley4eva2012haha at first i forgot who was the narrator i had to go back and read it again, but awesome job on the story!
6/8/2011 c1 Yeah baby
Dude I been waiting for the next Chapter and nothing please continue I really like the shot :D
Dude I been waiting for the next Chapter and nothing please continue I really like the shot :D
5/4/2011 c1 17AliasSpyCrazy
wow awesome
miley, that biotch lol
and poor poor lilly
awesome writing! keep it up!
17AliasSpyCrazywow awesome
miley, that biotch lol
and poor poor lilly
awesome writing! keep it up!
5/4/2011 c1 Wow
I kinda felt every thought Lilly had it's really good really and I want to read more :)
I kinda felt every thought Lilly had it's really good really and I want to read more :)
5/3/2011 c1 FlutePlayer123
I luv this story! Very well-written! It was very dramatic (in a gud way) and sumwhat angsty. Lyke I sed tho, AWESOME STORY! Continue ppplllzzz!
I luv this story! Very well-written! It was very dramatic (in a gud way) and sumwhat angsty. Lyke I sed tho, AWESOME STORY! Continue ppplllzzz!