for If It Were Otherwise5/18 c117 
5EJ 12212012
Holy crap! Literally everything from the first two seasons was in here! That was amazing. :D
5EJ 12212012Holy crap! Literally everything from the first two seasons was in here! That was amazing. :D
5/14 c117 Scribbles in the Dark
Wow. This is simply amazing. Your characters are so well written, their actions and thought-processes plausible. There are very few works of fanfiction in which I truly enjoy the OCs, but this is one of them. I am so impressed with the breadth and scope of this work. The level of detail is incredible and just maintaining that detail for the entirety of the story would make a lesser author hesitate or drop it altogether. That being said, I really enjoyed "If It Were Otherwise." I could not stop reading it! I've been reading it in my spare time (and my not so spare time) for the past 4 or 5 days. Bravo!
Wow. This is simply amazing. Your characters are so well written, their actions and thought-processes plausible. There are very few works of fanfiction in which I truly enjoy the OCs, but this is one of them. I am so impressed with the breadth and scope of this work. The level of detail is incredible and just maintaining that detail for the entirety of the story would make a lesser author hesitate or drop it altogether. That being said, I really enjoyed "If It Were Otherwise." I could not stop reading it! I've been reading it in my spare time (and my not so spare time) for the past 4 or 5 days. Bravo!
5/8 c117 9Catindahat
I can't believe this is over! I have loved this since I first started reading it and am so sad that it is over. This story is definitely up there as one of my favourites, you did such a brilliant job with it that I'm not sure how I'm going to cope now it's over. Amazing!
9CatindahatI can't believe this is over! I have loved this since I first started reading it and am so sad that it is over. This story is definitely up there as one of my favourites, you did such a brilliant job with it that I'm not sure how I'm going to cope now it's over. Amazing!
5/7 c117 6Sendai
Wow what an ending. I didn't see it coming. I almost feel sorry for poor crazy Jim.
Still I'm relieved that Sherlock was smart enough to stay alive and save everyone who mattered to him. Just a fantastic work of fiction.
6SendaiWow what an ending. I didn't see it coming. I almost feel sorry for poor crazy Jim.
Still I'm relieved that Sherlock was smart enough to stay alive and save everyone who mattered to him. Just a fantastic work of fiction.
5/7 c117 Ariannu
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Thank you so much for following through an finishing this epic. It was so beautifully written that I really looked forward to the next instalment and you never dropped the ball in terms of quality.
Thanks again!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Thank you so much for following through an finishing this epic. It was so beautifully written that I really looked forward to the next instalment and you never dropped the ball in terms of quality.
Thanks again!
5/6 c117 Peppy-chan
ScopesMonkey, I would just like to take the time to say how wonderfully crafted this story was and how happy I am to have come across it. The character development and the way you portrayed Moriarty were simply splendid. I cannot remember a time when I cried, laughed, screamed in anguish, and thoroughly enjoyed a fanfic as much as I did! Thank you for your fantastic rendition of John and Sherlock. I look forward to our other works!
ScopesMonkey, I would just like to take the time to say how wonderfully crafted this story was and how happy I am to have come across it. The character development and the way you portrayed Moriarty were simply splendid. I cannot remember a time when I cried, laughed, screamed in anguish, and thoroughly enjoyed a fanfic as much as I did! Thank you for your fantastic rendition of John and Sherlock. I look forward to our other works!
5/6 c117 Time
Its been wonderful, thank you for this, this story brought me many happy moments.
Its been wonderful, thank you for this, this story brought me many happy moments.
5/6 c116 hushedjournal6
This was one of the most incredible stories I've ever read. You had me at the edge of my seat for the majority of it, and more often than not my heart was in my throat! Loved, loved it so much! Thank you for the adventure :-3
This was one of the most incredible stories I've ever read. You had me at the edge of my seat for the majority of it, and more often than not my heart was in my throat! Loved, loved it so much! Thank you for the adventure :-3
5/6 c117 9your-icequeen
Wow, is this really finished. And has it been that long? Truly epic. I await the next adventure my dear!
9your-icequeenWow, is this really finished. And has it been that long? Truly epic. I await the next adventure my dear!
5/6 c117 4YouAreNowEnteringTheVoid
This was an absolutely fantastic story and it was beautifully written. Thank you for writing it. Could you give me a short summary of what happened in the last two chapters? I think I understood what happened, but I'm not sure. Thank you!
4YouAreNowEnteringTheVoidThis was an absolutely fantastic story and it was beautifully written. Thank you for writing it. Could you give me a short summary of what happened in the last two chapters? I think I understood what happened, but I'm not sure. Thank you!
5/5 c117 10DearSherlock
Hi just to say the story has been brilliant and believable and I have really really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for puublishing this 3
10DearSherlockHi just to say the story has been brilliant and believable and I have really really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for puublishing this 3
5/5 c115 3Starlight226
Ok bro, I'm sorry, but even after 116, I don't exactly understand what happened in those last three paragraphs. 116 says Seb died, Jim saw it, but is this Jim or Sherlock getting shot in those last few lines? Help?!
3Starlight226Ok bro, I'm sorry, but even after 116, I don't exactly understand what happened in those last three paragraphs. 116 says Seb died, Jim saw it, but is this Jim or Sherlock getting shot in those last few lines? Help?!