for Captive6/15 c33 lsis
WOW...just WOW! I absolutely loved your story! Completely and totally AWESOME and AMAZING!
WOW...just WOW! I absolutely loved your story! Completely and totally AWESOME and AMAZING!
5/30 c33 Guest
Now /this/ should be made into a movie
Now /this/ should be made into a movie
5/30 c23 Guest
I love how you capture the humor that appears in the books
I love how you capture the humor that appears in the books
5/27 c6 k
i really love this there should be more stories like this
i really love this there should be more stories like this
5/21 c33 
1EdwardLoverForever13
Wow! This was such an amazing fanfic! One of the best I have read! I usually don't like reading ones where they are vampires cause I'm like that's Stephanie's story but this one was so amazing and original! I really enjoyed it and loved it! Great job!
1EdwardLoverForever13Wow! This was such an amazing fanfic! One of the best I have read! I usually don't like reading ones where they are vampires cause I'm like that's Stephanie's story but this one was so amazing and original! I really enjoyed it and loved it! Great job!
4/25 c33 pangrl
What a story. Very creative embellishments on the mating dynamic. Really enjoyed the unique setting and scenario. Now that it's done my mind is playing with lots of burgeoning ideas where could expand the kingdom so to speak. Emmett and Rosalie, Charlie and Renee's induction, more on the epilogue and the twins mating. Fun read. Thanks for writing.
What a story. Very creative embellishments on the mating dynamic. Really enjoyed the unique setting and scenario. Now that it's done my mind is playing with lots of burgeoning ideas where could expand the kingdom so to speak. Emmett and Rosalie, Charlie and Renee's induction, more on the epilogue and the twins mating. Fun read. Thanks for writing.
4/18 c33 morena.davidson.3
Loved this..its made it to my favorites list..thanks so much for writing and sharing :)
Loved this..its made it to my favorites list..thanks so much for writing and sharing :)
4/14 c6 Guest
No babies. Eww. That's what ruined Breaking Dawn as well...
This story seemed so good...until the child factor...
No babies. Eww. That's what ruined Breaking Dawn as well...
This story seemed so good...until the child factor...
4/4 c13 1youngandmature
I can understand Bella's aversion to blood, but she's begun to really ** me off. She's risking so much - herself, the child (which I suspect will be girl and boy twins) and Edward. All humans eat meat, which contain traces of blood.
1youngandmatureI can understand Bella's aversion to blood, but she's begun to really ** me off. She's risking so much - herself, the child (which I suspect will be girl and boy twins) and Edward. All humans eat meat, which contain traces of blood.
3/29 c33 Amanda
Okay I just finished this bad boy and wow it was great and as if it wasn't good enough you threw in 33 which I don't smoke have never smoked but when people say I think I need a smoke after something particularly arousing I for once know what they mean and girl I read ALOT of fanfiction and that has not happened before. Amazing story thank you for writing and sharing!
Okay I just finished this bad boy and wow it was great and as if it wasn't good enough you threw in 33 which I don't smoke have never smoked but when people say I think I need a smoke after something particularly arousing I for once know what they mean and girl I read ALOT of fanfiction and that has not happened before. Amazing story thank you for writing and sharing!
3/29 c25 Amanda
LAWD your lemons are HOT! I've still got about 5 chapters to go, I might just instantaneously combust!
LAWD your lemons are HOT! I've still got about 5 chapters to go, I might just instantaneously combust!