for Disgaea: Jewel of the gods5/16 c45 Helma-chan
Keep writing the story, senpai... Great job as always. :)
Keep writing the story, senpai... Great job as always. :)
5/16 c45 Guest
Man, this is AWESOME! Hope you update fast, cause seriously this is an amazing piece of work!
Keep up the great work!
Man, this is AWESOME! Hope you update fast, cause seriously this is an amazing piece of work!
Keep up the great work!
5/15 c44 Guest
Sorry! Late review... *sigh...*
Anyway... Seriously, dude. Can't that Seedle guy die? He's sure tricky and... annoying. He's smart, but... evil.
Sorry! Late review... *sigh...*
Anyway... Seriously, dude. Can't that Seedle guy die? He's sure tricky and... annoying. He's smart, but... evil.
5/8 c45 
8Overlord Exor
Great job on bringing Mao's dark Mao in the chapter. Hey Kirbystarwarrior, here's an idea if you do Adell's heart and Laharl's Heart; In Adell's heart, he sees the memories of his parents as a baby with the physical forms of his parents and In Laharl's heart, that annoying demon slayer what's-her-name and Laharl's Father.
8Overlord ExorGreat job on bringing Mao's dark Mao in the chapter. Hey Kirbystarwarrior, here's an idea if you do Adell's heart and Laharl's Heart; In Adell's heart, he sees the memories of his parents as a baby with the physical forms of his parents and In Laharl's heart, that annoying demon slayer what's-her-name and Laharl's Father.
4/30 c23 overlordpringerx
anybody besides me ever thought prams dad was a weakass overlord? I mean he lost a 2 year old! In demon age thats like 2 days!
anybody besides me ever thought prams dad was a weakass overlord? I mean he lost a 2 year old! In demon age thats like 2 days!
4/18 c44 overlordpringerx
oh axel. What would your family say if they knew you went from dark hero to henge man douchebag? And to think asagi could even get a role as a main character if she researched a bit more. Just flash laharl and tell mao she'ld let him experiment on her in exchange for the main character role. But shell of course never have the brains to do so.
oh axel. What would your family say if they knew you went from dark hero to henge man douchebag? And to think asagi could even get a role as a main character if she researched a bit more. Just flash laharl and tell mao she'ld let him experiment on her in exchange for the main character role. But shell of course never have the brains to do so.
4/16 c43 Helma-chan
Awesome action you did there, Laharl! And poor Marona... :(
This is amazing, senpai! This is a great piece of work... Keep up the great work, senpai! :)
Awesome action you did there, Laharl! And poor Marona... :(
This is amazing, senpai! This is a great piece of work... Keep up the great work, senpai! :)
4/16 c43 Guest
What an unexpected turn down! I can't give you much details, but this chapter has it all! The action, suspense... It's AMAZING! :D
Can't wait for more! Keep it up, dood!
What an unexpected turn down! I can't give you much details, but this chapter has it all! The action, suspense... It's AMAZING! :D
Can't wait for more! Keep it up, dood!
4/10 c43 5Overlord Ai
Holy craporolli!But,I think Laharl is gettng too much screentime in this,so put the others in the spotlight a bit more.
5Overlord AiHoly craporolli!But,I think Laharl is gettng too much screentime in this,so put the others in the spotlight a bit more.
4/7 c43 overlordpringerx
yay! 2 of my requests were granted! And holy shit this was awesome! Ive got enough for a month by just reading this chapter over and over again! Btw thanks for the improvements you made to my intro.
yay! 2 of my requests were granted! And holy shit this was awesome! Ive got enough for a month by just reading this chapter over and over again! Btw thanks for the improvements you made to my intro.
3/30 c42 Helma-chan
Amazing... Amazing, senpai! This is a great piece of work... Keep up the great work, senpai! :)
Amazing... Amazing, senpai! This is a great piece of work... Keep up the great work, senpai! :)
3/30 c42 Guest
What an unexpected turn down! I can't give you much details, but this chapter has it all! :D
Can't wait for more! Keep it up, yo!
What an unexpected turn down! I can't give you much details, but this chapter has it all! :D
Can't wait for more! Keep it up, yo!
3/30 c41 Guest
Late noticing, I know. But... HOLY CRAP, MAN! This is a triple, awesome combo Chapter! Your brain's sure an imaginative one, huh?
Alright, moving on to the next one!
Late noticing, I know. But... HOLY CRAP, MAN! This is a triple, awesome combo Chapter! Your brain's sure an imaginative one, huh?
Alright, moving on to the next one!
3/29 c28 overlordpringerx
oh you did NOT just call ussop a coward, gordon. Liar yes but a coward would never fight for selfless reasons. Btw KSW how do you know about all these exclusive characters like pink if you dont own a psp?
oh you did NOT just call ussop a coward, gordon. Liar yes but a coward would never fight for selfless reasons. Btw KSW how do you know about all these exclusive characters like pink if you dont own a psp?