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5/21/2011 c1 LaughingFreely
Aww, how absolutely heart breaking! Little James has a younger sits that he doesn't know about, and his father doesn't even want the poor thing! Well, I mean sure it isn't his, but I mean still. That's not the baby's fault!

And phenomenal job at developing Brooke Diamond so far. You can see that she truly does love this little girl and that it kills Herr that she can't keep her, even after carrying her for 9 months. I got a little teary eyed myself as I read about all the tears Brooke shed over little Victoria...

I can't wait until I post this so I can go back and read more! And, oh, I really hope the part where James discovers he has a little sister comes up soon! :)

Again, great job on yet another fabulous story! Defiantly going on my favorites list! :)
5/14/2011 c3 Logan Henderson Is Mine
Awesome!
5/14/2011 c3 1BigTimeFan50
Uh oh trouble has started.
5/13/2011 c2 Logan Henderson Is Mine
AWESOME! :D
5/13/2011 c2 Scarlet 8D
Better, but I have absolutely no mental image. That's not something you want your story to be missing
5/13/2011 c2 BigTimeFan50
She should totally go for it.

It's sad not knowing yeah she looks like him because that's her brother.
5/13/2011 c1 Scarlet 8D
I'm a bit confused ok what's going on. Work on your sequencing
5/13/2011 c1 BigTimeFan50
Wow I wanted to cry by reading this. You definetely have to continue.

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