for Harry Potter: Archangel8/6/2012 c14 Stephanie O
Loved this line: "I am the avenging angel that is going to kick your sorry ** from here to hell and back you son-of-**!" :D
Loved this line: "I am the avenging angel that is going to kick your sorry ** from here to hell and back you son-of-**!" :D
8/6/2012 c13 Stephanie O
Very impressive part about recharging the stone protecting Godric's Hollow! I hope we get to see Harry's conversation with Godric soon! :)
Very impressive part about recharging the stone protecting Godric's Hollow! I hope we get to see Harry's conversation with Godric soon! :)
8/6/2012 c12 Stephanie O
I take it 'Mundane' is referring to Muggles? That's a serious rifle, with even more serious bullets! YIKES! I'd think the Order should be happy with their new robes/boots that come with all those cool "Batman" type gadgets!
I take it 'Mundane' is referring to Muggles? That's a serious rifle, with even more serious bullets! YIKES! I'd think the Order should be happy with their new robes/boots that come with all those cool "Batman" type gadgets!
8/6/2012 c10 Stephanie O
Very cool way to communicate...make a fire in your hands and floo call that way! Ingenious! :) Also, I really liked Harry's "Light" Mark of the phoenix - that's a good balance to the Dark Mark.
Very cool way to communicate...make a fire in your hands and floo call that way! Ingenious! :) Also, I really liked Harry's "Light" Mark of the phoenix - that's a good balance to the Dark Mark.
8/6/2012 c9 Stephanie O
Can't wait to see how they catch the governors responsible for "skimming" (scooping) Hogwarts funds! Looks like they had quite the racket going!
Can't wait to see how they catch the governors responsible for "skimming" (scooping) Hogwarts funds! Looks like they had quite the racket going!
8/6/2012 c8 Stephanie O
I like that Moody was so complimentary speaking of Ron - it's good that he's finally getting some credit for being good at things other than chess. He is Hermione's fiance, by the way, and she is his fiancee. Just for future reference, there are lots of prepositions, pronouns and articles that are incorrect or missing (and not just in this chapter). I don't say this to be rude or offend, but this story would be REALLY good if it was proofread a bit more.
I like that Moody was so complimentary speaking of Ron - it's good that he's finally getting some credit for being good at things other than chess. He is Hermione's fiance, by the way, and she is his fiancee. Just for future reference, there are lots of prepositions, pronouns and articles that are incorrect or missing (and not just in this chapter). I don't say this to be rude or offend, but this story would be REALLY good if it was proofread a bit more.
8/6/2012 c6 Stephanie O
I liked the part about Harry calling forth Death and the trade that ensued. You made Death into a very likable character - especially since he shared three important secrets/gifts with Harry in trade for the Hallows. Very cool how Harry can now just travel by shadow. :) It wasn't easy to wrap my head around Hermione calling Sirius "Daddy", though! Quite a few grammatical errors, and it appears that "sit and set" have been switched...just an FYI.
I liked the part about Harry calling forth Death and the trade that ensued. You made Death into a very likable character - especially since he shared three important secrets/gifts with Harry in trade for the Hallows. Very cool how Harry can now just travel by shadow. :) It wasn't easy to wrap my head around Hermione calling Sirius "Daddy", though! Quite a few grammatical errors, and it appears that "sit and set" have been switched...just an FYI.
8/6/2012 c3 Stephanie O
Very cool description of the Archangel suit! Some of the explanation was a tiny bit hard to follow, however, because of missing words here & there. Oh, and it looks like Ginny has no problem whatsoever with being betrothed to Harry! lol
Very cool description of the Archangel suit! Some of the explanation was a tiny bit hard to follow, however, because of missing words here & there. Oh, and it looks like Ginny has no problem whatsoever with being betrothed to Harry! lol
8/6/2012 c2 Stephanie O
Very intriguing developments! I assume Harry/Archangel was Ginny's mysterious rescuer from the Chamber? Does Ginny realize why she's betrothed to him, or do her parents even know she's betrothed to Harry?
Very intriguing developments! I assume Harry/Archangel was Ginny's mysterious rescuer from the Chamber? Does Ginny realize why she's betrothed to him, or do her parents even know she's betrothed to Harry?
7/16/2012 c28 
4Dalnim
This was an interesting story. I usually don't like when people unite two different stories to one, but I liked that you included Iron man to this. Thanks for this, it was nice to read :)
4DalnimThis was an interesting story. I usually don't like when people unite two different stories to one, but I liked that you included Iron man to this. Thanks for this, it was nice to read :)
6/28/2012 c28 2HP-DG-SB-HA-RR-KB-NT-TD-LL-AJ
Great story. Spelling mistakes here and there but not too bad. I enjoyed reading this story and thank you for taking the time to write it. I hope to see more great work from you in the future.
HP-DG-SB
2HP-DG-SB-HA-RR-KB-NT-TD-LL-AJGreat story. Spelling mistakes here and there but not too bad. I enjoyed reading this story and thank you for taking the time to write it. I hope to see more great work from you in the future.
HP-DG-SB
5/29/2012 c28 5Cosmyk Angel
Interesting story. A lot of visitors from other series. Did you get your idea for heartstones from Mercedes Lackey?
Cosmyk
5Cosmyk AngelInteresting story. A lot of visitors from other series. Did you get your idea for heartstones from Mercedes Lackey?
Cosmyk
4/30/2012 c28 Silverdragonstar
Wow talk about the party you must have going on in your head! You are able to pull all sorts of charactors into one story. Made for a fun read.
Wow talk about the party you must have going on in your head! You are able to pull all sorts of charactors into one story. Made for a fun read.
4/28/2012 c3 3Neumzie
this is all a bit too fast and calm. she just found out some crazy truths about the world, including that she has no choice in who she marries; it doesnt matter if she likes him or not, for a free thinking, opinionated young woman like her, the not-having-a-choice thing would rub her the wrong way entirely. she would not be this calm and i doubt harry would be this calm, either (no nerves about finally coming clean to this girl? really?). i wish there had been some actual buildup to their first kiss. this story seems really interesting, and im gonna keep reading, but i really hope you expanded on their emotions in later chapters
3Neumziethis is all a bit too fast and calm. she just found out some crazy truths about the world, including that she has no choice in who she marries; it doesnt matter if she likes him or not, for a free thinking, opinionated young woman like her, the not-having-a-choice thing would rub her the wrong way entirely. she would not be this calm and i doubt harry would be this calm, either (no nerves about finally coming clean to this girl? really?). i wish there had been some actual buildup to their first kiss. this story seems really interesting, and im gonna keep reading, but i really hope you expanded on their emotions in later chapters