for Harry Potter: Archangel4/19/2012 c16 
12Advent of Shadows
This has been a really entertaining story, but this is where I stop.
I could accept most of the things that have happened so far, even though I felt it was rushed in parts, but the fact that the story became a cross-over, despite the fact that you did not say it was beforehand, was enough to convince me to stop reading.
I like Iron Man and Marvel Comics, but suddenly introducing them into a Harry Potter fanfic was just too much for me.
12Advent of ShadowsThis has been a really entertaining story, but this is where I stop.
I could accept most of the things that have happened so far, even though I felt it was rushed in parts, but the fact that the story became a cross-over, despite the fact that you did not say it was beforehand, was enough to convince me to stop reading.
I like Iron Man and Marvel Comics, but suddenly introducing them into a Harry Potter fanfic was just too much for me.
2/18/2012 c28 lija
Good epilogue.
I would expect Harry to be embracing the afterlife after being reborn again, so his question to Death was unexpected.
You didn't mention how many kids Hermione and Ron had.
Good epilogue.
I would expect Harry to be embracing the afterlife after being reborn again, so his question to Death was unexpected.
You didn't mention how many kids Hermione and Ron had.
2/18/2012 c26 lija
Good chapter.
I've reread the previous chapters to remind myself what occurred before.
Whoa, what happened was something I didn't expect. Though the 'prophecy' pretty much said it was going to happen. However, I didn't expect it to be so literal since most 'prophecies' are figurative, not literal in a sense.
Albus and Nick make fearsome opponents. I pity any fools who tried to battle against them.
Good chapter.
I've reread the previous chapters to remind myself what occurred before.
Whoa, what happened was something I didn't expect. Though the 'prophecy' pretty much said it was going to happen. However, I didn't expect it to be so literal since most 'prophecies' are figurative, not literal in a sense.
Albus and Nick make fearsome opponents. I pity any fools who tried to battle against them.
2/1/2012 c28 Creativelover491
That was an amazing story and one of the best ones I've read by far... Keep up the great work...you have a great talent for writing
That was an amazing story and one of the best ones I've read by far... Keep up the great work...you have a great talent for writing
1/16/2012 c2 abraxas01
Well I made it 2 chapters before I had to quit. Run on sentences and a boy who lived... with wings, yeah sorry but no.
Well I made it 2 chapters before I had to quit. Run on sentences and a boy who lived... with wings, yeah sorry but no.