for Harry Potter: Archangel1/10/2012 c28 MarinePotterfan
Great story, I enjoyed reading it. On a side note Ordnance is the stuff that goes BOOM! and Ordinance is a city law or rule. I only let you know that because its my job to make things go BOOM!
Thanks for writing
MPF
Great story, I enjoyed reading it. On a side note Ordnance is the stuff that goes BOOM! and Ordinance is a city law or rule. I only let you know that because its my job to make things go BOOM!
Thanks for writing
MPF
1/10/2012 c3 RebeccaRoy
Wow, Harry has been busy, all the training and such will help, and I hope he gives everyone who supports ol' snake face a run for their money and then some!
Wow, Harry has been busy, all the training and such will help, and I hope he gives everyone who supports ol' snake face a run for their money and then some!
1/10/2012 c26 
8tumshie
This is a good story but you really need to consult a dictionary to make sure you are using the correct word, as an example look up vulnerable and venerable and see if you've got the right one in this chapter.
8tumshieThis is a good story but you really need to consult a dictionary to make sure you are using the correct word, as an example look up vulnerable and venerable and see if you've got the right one in this chapter.
1/10/2012 c28 Mrs Yaya
I want to thank you for a wonderful story. When I was growing up I would sneak my brothers comic books and read them, I loved Iron Man and all the other heros. My brother to this day has these books.
I want to thank you for a wonderful story. When I was growing up I would sneak my brothers comic books and read them, I loved Iron Man and all the other heros. My brother to this day has these books.
1/10/2012 c28 5michaelc100
i really realy loved this story. shame you created the epilogue though, a sequel would have been well received.
5michaelc100i really realy loved this story. shame you created the epilogue though, a sequel would have been well received.
1/10/2012 c28 3azphxbrd
Great story,I have enjoyed reading it.I am looking forward to reading more of your works of art.
AZPHXBRD
3azphxbrdGreat story,I have enjoyed reading it.I am looking forward to reading more of your works of art.
AZPHXBRD
1/10/2012 c28 ceo55
This is definitely on of the best top 5 stories I have read since joining this site several years ago! Thank you for your creation and creativity I will read and re-read this many times, thank you!
ceo55
This is definitely on of the best top 5 stories I have read since joining this site several years ago! Thank you for your creation and creativity I will read and re-read this many times, thank you!
ceo55
1/10/2012 c28 SeaBreeze2Ga
Very well done, you did an excellent job on this story and I really enjoyed it, thanks for writing it.
SeaBreeze :-)
Very well done, you did an excellent job on this story and I really enjoyed it, thanks for writing it.
SeaBreeze :-)